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Ahhhh, pack your bags?????????? Does this mean Asher's taking Muffin with him? Someplace safe?

And whoa! Wait! Asher's known all along where Muffin was! He's been "tracking" him for all this time! He knew exactly when he was at the whorehouse, lol.

And now Asher's the new owner of the cafe! What a riot! Poor Muffin. But I guess if Asher takes him away, that won't matter!

Omg, these last two chapters were gold! I devoured each one! :)

I'm on pins and needles to see what happens next! Awesome job Mahsa! Awesome! :)

I love Muffin. He's so huggable and I just want to wrap my arms around him and squeeze! Although I think he'd kick me in the shins if I'd try. :D

I have a feeling Asher isn't really the prick he let's people think he is... At least he has a soft spot for Muffin, but then again... who doesn't! :DD

Looking forward to the next chapter, just had to let you know. :)

Two chapters in one week? One of these chapters contains angsty sort of make-up sex? I am sold! But Asher just made to ruin it by telling Matt they're going back to town, eh? I'm imagining some sort of tug-of-war is going to occur now over this issue but hey, at least they had sex first!

The whole build up was amazing. The panic attack, Asher trailing his every step, confrontation in the bathroom followed by the scene we've all been waiting for. Seeing that moment of confirmation for Asher was amazing to read and I could gush about this chapter forever. Now I'm dying to see what happens next.

holy cow.... A update? I'm shocked.......

Well lol MR. Pickle.. What's about Alrick's little girl? We havent seen her since the warehouse... What's happened to her.... What's about Vincent... I just can't believe Muffin gave it up just like that...

What's about what really happened in that phone booth that lead to it blowing up.... And How Dare leave such a cliffhanger? hmm? Well I hope you have fun moving into a new apartment and decorating n stuff!!! ;)
Well don't leave us hanging for too long okay!!!

Almost back to the old times now. And are they eloping? (Heheh.) I'm joking... But Asher just became his boss, which would make it a little strange to everyone else at the pub that he and Matthew would all of a sudden disappear at the same time. It would certainly strike up some odd stories and speculations from them wouldn't it?

Also, at the beginning (in the bar) I may have found an error. It says Vincenzo is speaking, but I think you probably meant Vincent...

Thanks for the quick update!

you are my favourite author ever!!! Including published ones :P brilliant couple of chapters!

Wow, in the end they both caved a lot faster than I thought... and Matt can finally stop pretending he's unaware of the things we all know.
So is a green car going to come pick them up? ;P

SWEET JESUS ! Thank you so much! Excellent writing as usual; what else is new? This was filled with delicious MattyxAsh goodness! This story is mostly unpredictable which I like. This chapter really shows how MatthewxAsher love each other or if not, then are fucking close to it and are on the journey to... but I think it's obvious they LOVE each other (Well, I do hope) Well, I kinda think they fucked faster than I would have thought lol. I feel Vincenzo has ABSOLUTELY NO CHANCE! I LOVE THIS SERIES!! I'll be anxiously awaiting mo.

Yay! They need each other! Also, did you just think of random words that start with Mat? Because I really do enjoy your chapter titles.

Hot~~ That was hot~♥ Oh gosh Muffin's unmitigated embarrassment had me smiling the entire chapter!! xD Asher is seriously too freaking sweet. Seriously, your cliffhangers will be the death of me. Looking forward to your netx update!! Good luck moving out!! ♥♥♥