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i can't wait for the next chapter. re-read muffin and remembered why i love these charactors so much. hope the next update is soon.

This chapter was so full of juicy goodness, I got fat and too lazy to review.

Anyways, I totally smoked a metaphorical cigarette after it, it was that good.

Matthew better not be backsliding into his selfish ways however.. time for the brat to answer his phone or start thinking about how to help Vincenzo and Elena.

I'm anticipatin the next update either this week or next week from your twitter comment..

the end of chapter 12 had me saying DUN DUN DUUUUN O.o i can't be the only one right?

I was really hapy today. I read Muffin a couple months ago. and i went to reread it last night and to my pleasent suprise the squeal was out. I was thrilled. Your story is by far one of the best ive read. I cant wait for the next chapter. Asher is such a deviant lol, i cant wait to see what he has planned for Muffin.

Ewww. You mentioned a Vinny/Matty/Ashy love triangle before...? No, just no!!! Muffin and Azsher FOREVER. Dudeeeee. It's not even funny. It's somewhat disturbing too, cus when you first described Vinny I imagined this 30-40 yr old dude with a beer gut and a ratty old tank top with a gross mustache and dirty hair. Grosss! Promise me it'll be Matt/Ash all te wayyy..? :D

MattxCarter? Eww. Turning Matt into quite the slut aren't you? For some reason I envision Carter as bald or balding... :/ Same with Vincenzo really, ahah.

Squeeee!! Nom nom. It was soooo romantic. Ahh. *dies* I hope the oh-so-coveted "I love you" scene will be present sometime in the near future :D Haha. Fuck you Vincenzo, he's ALL Asher's.

THIS STORY IS PERFECTION. I read Asher's "Make me fall in love with you" as "Prove that you care about me," or something to that effect, because Asher was so totally already in love with Matthew, and then every single thing that happened in these last two chapters proved that Matthew did care about him - Matthew drinking bourbon, Asher chasing after him with the umbrella, the keychain, etc. And Teh Sex! Unf. I just love everything about this fic: the characters, the plot, all of it. And it's so well-written! Thank you for writing this, seriously, and I can't wait for more!

Oh my goddddd. i checked back to see if there was by some miracle an update and there WASSSSSS. and what an amazing update, i love matthew and asher's interactions, and when asher calls matthew "muffin" *melt* pack your bags? ashers taking him back with him? moving him somewhere safer? i didn't think carter would hurt matt since he saved his life that time, or is he really an evil actor pretending to be friendly? i hope he's evil, more drama and action and danger... :) ahhhh can't wait till the next update.