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I thought you were gonna post!

hey, i juuuust found this story, and muffin, i really enjoy your writing!

man, when Matt saved Carter i was starting to think: now Matt has 3 guys who are seeking him out for bedtime activities xD

While waiting for an update I re-read the whole Muffin-Matthew story... I can't get enough of it. At the last chapters of Muffin I realized that I was listening to Tatu's 'Running blind' song again and again, it matches Muffin so perfectly (IMO)

Still LOVE this story, the characters, everything... Go, girl, GO! :D

This is good.

Im so glad you updated this story!
I have to admit i left keeping an eye on this story a while back so i could store up the chapters to read them all together (i read pretty fast XD) so when i saw there was no 13 chapters i decided i would have to re-read Muffin (for who knows how many times ive read it now XD) and then i started on Matthew again. I have now read all the 13 chapters here and im upset i read them so fast.
Love seeing Matthews insecure side as its really nice to see even though inside he feels everythings a mess he still has people around him that can drag him back and try to make some sense of the world ^^

I really cant wait for the next chapter, and so glad you have a facebook group now as ive liked the group and im keeping an eye on it ^^

Gl for the future in real life and gl in writing the next chapter!
Dont make our fav German to angry with Matthew!!

Glad to hear good things may be distracting you from the story, versus getting tired of writing (don't want to see mass "muffin/matthew" fans tying themselves to railroad tracks).

Sad or touching moments:
Matthew packing up life to go on the run (including cramming his drugs in).
Asher still calls him Muffin.
Leah trying to be all grown up.
Cuddling (awwwww).

"I frowned at his blatant disregard to acknowledge me"
Matthew still sometimes has his head firmly logged up his butt it seems. Not only has he basically forgotten about Vincenzo and Elena the minute Asher returns, he's ignored his calls (life and death daily threats so both should be worried).

And oh dear, even saint Alrick is pissed at Matthew. But yay, he's alive and gets to see Leah! The alternative was a level of angst I didn't want to read (wimp).

I really like how Asher is starting to change. I've always found him quite hard to like, which is a little disturbing with a main love interest, but seeing him trying and not being a complete controlling asshole is nice. Before this chapter I was kind of favouring Vincenzo as a love interest, but I'm definitely moving more towards backing Asher. Which is good, because it's pretty obvious Vincenzo is going to be the losing team.

Tumblr is the only thing I can think of that I use that would work for updates.

Just finished reading the whole thing in one sitting and want to do it again :) I read Muffin ages ago and didn't even know there was a sequel until recently XP It's always a great feeling when you find a story that you've missed before that totally captivates you. Can't wait for more updates!!

Kukuku! So happy! Happy belated thanksgiving to you, and this story is definitely not 'old-news' >>
I guess Alrick is still pretty pissed that Muffin pretty much set them all up that time, hm? To be honest, it wouldn't be easy letting something like that go. Can imagine he's not gonna let him near his daughter for a long while. >>'

BUT WHAT!

WHHYY is Vincenzo just ignoring him!! D:! Is it because of Asher? >> Seriousllyyy~ I love Vincenzo more than Asher, I just can't help it. Not that I don't love Asher, but Vincenzo's got this whole 'injured-soldier' thing going on. Asher needs scars...
-sigh- I get that this is going to end up with Asher and Muffin together-ish, or something like that, but I guess I'll just have to dream about Muffin getting it on with Vincenzo, neh? >>

Anyway! Enough of my babble, I'mma go re-read Muffin, because my memory is foggy.