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by kiyoai

person Mint
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I'm almost speechless. Now what happened to Leah and Alrick back there? Good God, this story always stirs up strong emotions out of me 'cause I just love it so much. I'm so happy and relieved that you directly stated in this chappie multiple times... I think... that Matt chose Asher and chose him over Vincenzo, and I am also glad that Vincenzo seems to know lol! I so want Asher and Matt to get a happy ending, but part of me has a sense of doubt that they will actually be TRULY happy and stay that way. I'm praying you'll make a happy ending.

Oh God, you're SUCH a skilled author; your writing is truly beautiful and AMAZING to me at most times. I can only HOPE to be half as good as you are if I choose to write. Love ya, mahsa!! Please update asap, and I really hope that you manage to finish this story. I have faith that you will though! *hugs*
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So happy to see this updated! And so quickly after the last chapter. The dick waving between Asher and Vincenzo was pretty funny, and it's always nice to see Asher getting jealous and acting like someone stuck a pole up his butt. But I'm glad Vincenzo and Muffin had a reconciliation although I wish the same could be said about Alrick but small steps! Loved the interaction between Asher and Muffin although I'm still on edge to see what happens when they find out about Muffin's drug dependence.

Cruel cliffhanger to leave us on. Loved the chapter, love the story, hope to see more soon.
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nothing wrong with a bit of chaos and destruction. The pacing was just fine with this chapter. You didn't need to end it in another cliffhanger though! Argh! Though, as an author myself I do realise that cliffhangers are like candy trails, making readers keep coming for more.
person v
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aaahh always so intriguing!

My heart totally froze when Leah's whistle blew desperately. Please don't let anything happen to her, please?

Asher can't sleep with Matt? STD? Something? And Alrick is right, Matt and Asher cannot possibly have a peaceful future together. My heart's already breaking for them, I swear. And Vincenzo. Vincenzo's so strong, he took everything in stride even though he must be kind of heartbroken right now.
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, another cliffhanger? So mean. :(

Great chapter as usual. I'm super curious about what Asher's "condition" at night is. In the train, Daniel mentioned something about how Asher should have his own room, and Vin said something similar in the cabin. I hope it's revealed soon.

Thanks for the update. Hope there's another one in the near future. :D
person Syreen
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, update! :D

I really can't say much now except: NOOO!!!
Please update as soon as you can!
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I haven't reviewed this story in a very long time but thought I would just drop and let you know how much I am enjoying the sequel to Muffin. I do hope that it has a happy ending and that Matthew/Muffin ends up with Asher and no one that I love in story dies.

You are the queen of these cliffhangers and I commend you for not giving up on this story.

I only wish you would update more often than you do and also that you never ever remove these stories from AFF so readers can enjoy them time and time again.

Please consider posting weekly from now on. I will be truthful and say I forgot about Muffin because it's been so long since I read it.

person tainted wolf
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for such a long update - made it feel like a Christmas present that came late!

Looks like Muffin was right, everytime he gets in a car something bad happens - poor Leah - I hope she is alight and Alrick as well...and Daniel too..

I hope you had a great Holiday and Happy early-New Year
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaaa! I'm so happy for the update and I loved the chapter but why?! Why did you leave it at a cliffhanger?! oh well I just hope you update quickly or else I might die.
person oo
schedule December 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
merry christmas!