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ummmm do i want pron? YES but i do want i to feel natural and not forced and i lk that they are resting together and i do enjoy the characters so much. i hope that this story gets updates very oftern and never ends! lol

Best story ever. You need to update. I need this like water.

What if I said I read it for both? lol I'm not disappointed that you took out the sex scene in this chapter. It would have felt forced. I did love this chapter though. And honestly, I read your story because of Matthew. I love being in his head and watching him fall so madly in love for this man who is so bad for him. It's a story we all know so well, but never like this, and that's why I love it. You will, of course, have to add some yumminess in soon though :3 lol do what you want though. It's your story after all, and we're all still reading it. Hell, I check back every day to see if you've updated. So keep it up :D

downfall in a good way! downfall in a good way damnit!

I'm so happy you updated this wonderful story!
I'm a bit relieved that Asher seems to be OK. The final scene was absolutely beautiful!! Well, I'd lie if I told you I wasn't expecting them to end making love, but there would be time for that in next chapters (I HOPE so haha).

I wanted them both to be making love at the end, but then since Asher is hurt and such, that wasn't and wouldn't be a good idea.
So I like how you thought about pain of Asher's and removed the scene for next time, very smart! Hope there's some hardcore scene on your next chapters and, or updates! And welcome back! We hope you are doing fine! I was so happy when I saw that you had updated:)

oh my god, the chapter 16 was perrrfect.

porn scenes are always awesome but so was this. holy emotional rollercoaster.

i'm also in luvv with asher

I never read this story for the smexyness. The characters are just too interesting to only focus on that :D

Well, I for one am not expecting any sex from this story. No point if it doesn't make sense.
While I am invested in the characters, I'm a bit disappointed that it seems Asher and Mathew will be together. They don't really make sense to me. It feels like two people obsessed not with each other but with the IDEA of each other.
I think Mathew and Vin make much more sense. It is obvious they care about each other in a sober and realistic way that isn't a blind and passionate love but could become the kind of love long lasting relationships are built on.
It's obvious that even if Asher and Muffin end up together and relatively happy this story ending won't be a happy one.

Bah but that's just me, I still think this is amazing even if it doesn't go the way I want it to. Keep up the good work and please do your best to update soon I can't wait to see how this ends.

I still like this. Great job

Please update soon. I'm more interested in the characters. Hope you keep writing after this story!