rate_review Reviews

I didn't even notice you said not to read this if I hadn't read 'muffin', but I read it anyways. And I think even if you didn't know what was up everything still made perfect sense.

This story is super-fantastically wonderful! I am IN LOVE with this story ,I think the ending of Muffin was PERFECT but I'm so glad you're writing the sequel ,your writing style is wonderful, it makes me laugh and cry at the same time. I love how you have developed Matthew
Asher and Matthew are so lovely, I'm relieved that Asher seems to be OK, please please please Don't Kill Anyone in the end. dont give me a sad ending. at least don't kill Vincenzo! he is my favourite character ^ ^
I really love the scene at the bath with Vincenzo and his goomba
really want to give you a longer review but Unfortunately my english is poor(im Iranian)
PLEASE update soon! thank u

INTENSE!! I loved it. And I def. don't read this for the porn. All though now that you say you are nearing the final chapters I hope that there's a least one more steamy scene in the mix. And while I'm with many other reviewers in that Vincenzo holds a special place in my heart (the same place I keep puppies and heart doodles), I've obsessively followed this story because of the chemistry and drama around Matthew and Asher. It's been a long slow build, discovering all these mini layers on both of them. I don't know if there is a happy ending for them (at least not in the Disney sense) they both have to many issues, flaws, and ghosts(although Matthew's aren't as bloody as Ashers) to ever be perfectly happy, apart or together. I just feel that they would be happiest TOGETHER. Even if that is the "selfish" choice. They've both been through a lot of crap in their lives, why can't they be a little selfish? I certainly don't expect Asher to put down his gun and go into some legit business, while Matt goes to college and plays house/boyfriend. They're both WAY to interesting and unique to do something so boring! lol. I agree with one of the other reviewers and hope we get a few more answers to some of the on going mysteries and vague background/past references before we wrap up. I hope Alrick and Matthew manage to have a long chat and smooth some of the rough edges in that relationship. And I would LOVE to hear from Zach and Anna again. No matter what happens you'll still be my favorite writer among all the stories I follow. And I'll be sad to say goodbye to this amazing world you've created. Maybe you could write a third story about Vincenzo finding someone special? :-P

more!

Thanks for the update

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Honestly, had they had sex when he was that wounded I woulda thought it was ridiculous and my respect for the story would have gone down lots. So you did good, lol. At least, in my mind.


Wow, well... I didn't see that chapter last time, for some reason.


It was.... wow.... oh um... seriously it could end here and although there would be a billion plot holes that weren't ever tied up, it'd be great.

btw I know they'd do great in a regular situation because they MAKE their own drama when they are in normal situations.

Actually I don't think I was ever reading expecting hardcore porn, haha. Once you hit a second volume in porn there is only so many plots you can execute and keep it interesting. I'm totally excited and sad to see this ending! I was here for the beginning of Muffin, it feels like forever ago. Keep up the awesome work.

The end of the story???? Already????? You're kidding, right? Aren't there so many unanswered questions? Wait, what about when Asher cornered Muffin int the telepone booth, way back when? Telling him to make Asher fall in love with him. Ok, so Asher is, but will he admit it? Will Muffin admit his feelings to Asher?

And I agree w/you; if there was a sex scene in here it would have been out of place. Asher's too hurt to even think about sex. And I don't know why, for some reason I thought he got shot in the back, not the shoulder.

And wow, that scene where he was choking Muffin; really scary. Muffin finally understands why Asher can't fall asleep next to him. Asher's protecting Muffin from whatever he's afraid he'll do in his sleep. Scary thought.

Awesome chapter Mahsa! As usual! And yes, I am so invested in these characters! Omg, Vincenzo, rough and tough Vincenzo, maybe was CRYING in the shower along with Muffin! And he helped Muffin, he sat with him in the shower, with all his clothes on and HELPED him try to cope with everything that happened. Yes, your characters are amazing and I can't wait to read more! :)

im not gonna lie. i really wanted to see Muffin with Vincezo before he got back wit Asher. i was cheering hard for that one. im happy he and Asher are together again but still though...anyways love it. cant wait for more. and great action scenes and describing Muffin's panic attack and pill swallowing. i was hurting for him.

Awesome, as always :)