rate_review Reviews

Omg Omg OMG!! I love this story! It was so riveting that i could not stop reading at all. Literally, I kept reading until 5 a.m, it was that good. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out!!! Keep up the good work! :D

Love this story! Muffin had me glued to the computer until I devoured it lol Now I'm hooked on this one. Can't wait for an update. I added a request to follow you on twitter so I know when you update ( you said you'd post it there you know! lol) Hope we don't have wait too long. Thanks for taking the time to share your writing.

Hi! I really enjoy the story and the characters. Are u planning to release the remaining chapters? I wanna know how it will end :)

Hi.. I can't remember if I've ever left you any reviews before if I haven't please forgive me. I have totally enjoy this story and muffin! I was very excited and happy to see this new chapter so just wanted you to know I love your writing and your style very much I was really kinda hoping for a go around with goomba and vincent even if it was a sureal drug induce full on panick dream but never the less I too would like to see a happy ending to this story but no presure I'll enjoy it any way thanks for sharing your work! read ya later

Chap 16.
no I like how realistic you made this chapter.. putting a sex scene in this chapter wouldn't seem right considering Asher's in pain... OMG I'M SOOOO GLAD YOU UPDATED! THIS STORY IS JUST SO WANDERFUL <3 I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

What's going on? This isn't an update with a brand new chapter and you haven't posted one in over a year. You've edited something, possibly just added a few extra paragraphs to chapter 16, but most likely probably just added an a/n. Please just give us the facts so we know what's going on and if story is being discontinued instead of occasionally editing with a/n's so readers don't forget you exist instead of finishing the story.

Dear Mahsa,
I'm sure you're used to people asking this, but please would you do those last couple of chapters?
I am so impressed by your writing, and yes, I'm invested in the characters, big time.
A sex scene is nice, of course it is, but mainly I need to see the wrap-up for this fic, which you've been kind enough to give us after 'Muffin'.
Hugs,
Farri

This story (and Muffin) are utterly amazing!!! I am so glad I found them, oh my gawd. You've kept me very much occupied and unwilling to move from my laptop for the past two days! I love how I can never guess whats going to happen next. Your plot has been so original and with so many twists that I couldn't stop reading! Your writing is also amazing - very to the point, but with lots of insight into Matthew's mind that truly characterised him. I am in love with Asher too, haha. I am very much rooting for him! From what I can see from your profile (ie a bit of stalking) it seems you're not going to continue this? That makes me really sad, since I can't even express how amazing I found this story. I was in serious need of a well written, good quality slash and your two stories both fit the bill perfectly! I understand though if life gets in the way, but hopefully one day you'll pick this story back up and make my day!

are you ever going to continue this story? it's been sooo long now :( x

ugh! I'm going to need more of this story! Love the characters, love how mature Muffin is growing and I love that Asher is opening up more. Such a fun read. Can't wait for the next chapter!