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by kiyoai

person miles
schedule January 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I've just read Muffin and Matthew again :) and I can't wait for more...

Come back soon, please

person Jay
schedule January 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I just got acquainted with this website yesterday (LOL) and I totaly love your writing. I hope you update soon. :D
Congratulations on your job, BTW! I hope I get to move out of my country too. -__--

person sad reader!
schedule December 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

you should update girl.im dying here!

person Anon
schedule November 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Everyday once in a while I come back to check for updates...but I still have hope :) Happy 1 year anniversary since the last update! I've read muffin+matthew about 6 times since jan 2016 and I still love it :) There is something special about this story that I appreciate very much. I am still a little confused about how I feel about Muffin, I just can't seem to place him anywhere. Sometimes he seems like a complete child to me, but not in a way that gives me an impression of his age. I'm not sure how to describe it actually. Maybe it's more about the overall writing of the story, somehow it's a complete mystery to me. Despite the number of times I've read it, it still confuses me every time. But in a good way. Anyway, I hope this story gets picked up again as I am sure so many readers like me are dying for it. If only real life could work the way we want it to haha. Thank you and hope you're doing well in your new place!

person Allysonwonderland
schedule September 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So let me just start this review by saying OH MY DOSH! I LOVE this story series!!! And I'm seriously late to this party but in my defense I tend to stray away from first person narratives, lucky for me I was feeling like something deferent a few days ago when I happened to stumble upon this story. After which I devoured both Muffin and Matthew in a matter of days.... Ok so I have no life, but I love the world you've built here. I must say that your writing is superb and I would just not be able to live happily without seeing the end of this story. You have effectively sucked me into these poor characters lives and I must find the ending (hopefully happy but hey beggars can't be chosers!) you may never see this review and as a writer myself I understand how RL can get in the way of both time and inspiration. Again I must beg though that you don't abandon this story much less writing in general you are simply too talented. Anyways sorry for the gush fest I just had to share with you the impact this had. I leave you with yet another muffin, poppyseed as there my favorite, in hopes it brings you back. Hope your doing well in your worldly travels. 

;) AllysonWonderland

person LoS
schedule August 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I just want to cry because I am so invested in this story and these fab characters and I won't be able to sleep later because I can't bear the not knowing! Arggghhhh, why do I do it to myself?! I knew I shouldn't have started the WIP but I loved Muffin and just couldn't help myself!

This story is so much better. Better and more realistic characters, more angst, great writing- I absolutely love it.

Thank you Mahsa so much, you have filled my last four days with your two brilliant stories. My poor husband and nippers have been slightly relegated and will be thrilled that I've come to the end. I, however, am devastated!

I can't wait for the next chapter .....

person RitsuO3O
schedule July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is one on the best stories on this site.  You work so hard on this story and your effort shows.  I look forward to the next update.  Thanks for sharing this with us.

person Anon
schedule May 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So good, so saf that it has been abandoned! !
person dana
schedule March 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm on my knees begging please update, please.
person Mint
schedule March 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for continuing this story. I wonder what Asher did. Anyways please write the next chap soon!