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I flew through the first book and this one is just as awesome! I love the gritty tone and the real characters with real flaws! This is the best! Update soon

Mahsa, Mahsa, Mahsa!!!!!

There better not be another four years before Muffin and Asher see each other again!!!!!

But if Asher agrees to work with Nazzerili (sorry, I botched up the spelling), then couldn't Vincenzo start hanging out with him? That would give Muffin reason to also.

Oh, what a mess they are in!!!

Great writing, Mahsa! Looking forward to the next installment in a few weeks. :)

You are so famous for this story,if it was published I would buy a copy for sure.All your characters have so many problem in their lives and the problems just keep pouring on them but it still feels so real when your reading this story,like there is a muffin out there living this life and sharing it with us,you become these characters yourself when you write them,that's how convincing they are.You sound like a very hard working person,no wonder you could create such a fine piece of work.Lots of love and thank you for this chapter,I'm already starving for more:))

Thank you so much for updating! I love this story and was pretty sure at this point that it had been abandoned. I'm glad I bothered to keep checking back. It's a pity AFF doesn't have email notifications for updates.

I loved the sensory description you used in this chapter. The heat, the claustrophobia in the shop, it all came across clearly and effectively so that I could really feel how overwhelming everything was for him.

Thanks again!

Chapters' name: matchmaking, maternal,

Thanks so much for updating. Great chapter.

Please finish it !

I'm starting to think you are evil leaving us hanging like that. :-) I am so glad you updated and it was so worth waiting for. I decided a few weeks ago to re-read Mathew so I was half way through when you up dated.
In one of the chapters you asked for songs that reminded us of the characters. When I was reading Mathew and he was in the burning warehouse, Nickelback was playing and the song I'd come for you played. It reminded me of Asher and Mathew. Asher coming for Mathew.
Anyway I'm sorry you got hateful E-mails although it does show how much people are enjoying it. Keep up the good work and I will look forward to the next chapter.

Vincenzo is just as manipulative as Asher can be. Too late you've already gone down the rabbit hole Muffin. And there's no way out. Thanks for updating! :) looking forward to seeing what happens next.

So happy to have you back! Like others, I have followed muffins/matthew for years and look forward to your continuing the story! ... - As for chapter names, I suggest matrix/matrices (array, imprint), matched, matchless, matchmaker(?), mattress (of course), mat, maths, matriculate, matinee, matzen/matzo (yewish bread), maturity, matrimonial (?), matter of fact, matutinal (early dwelling, found that in google), evt maitre and combinations. Goodluck and thank you for sharing!

What's my opinion on this chapter? I'm as terrified as Matthew!!!
I'm sure you heard it before but I have to say all of these characters seem SO real. You're doing a great job.
Have you ever tried to publish it? Your story is much more better than many published book out there.
About chapter names, what do you think about "Matinees" or "Maturating" ?