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by kiyoai

person amoxi
schedule December 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Queen of cliffhangers indeed. Fuck, fuck, fuck...

So thats what floated through my head after regarding Asher's parting words for this chapter: Two possibilities why he's pissed like hell:

1. Matts behavior with Miss Sunset and him at the café. That would be the logical choice since the other one should be impossible. Even though we know Asher can put up a hell of a front and wouldn't show his annoyance directly when in the company of Miss Yellow Sundress, I also just can't imagine Asher getting this pissed about Matt being jealous. On the contrary, I think he would be more happy about it.

That leaves me with number two:

2. Asher knows about Vincenzo and Matt getting it on. But now that should be impossible huh? How should he? Even though I'm quite confident about Asher not missing anything in his environment he is hardly a psychic. So my mind somehow conjures this idea of Asher installing a camera or bugging device in their hotel room because he doesn't trust those two, understandably, considering their past attraction towards each other which he hardly missed. It would be possible too with him being in the city.

Now, though I can't entirely rule out number one I totally want it to be number two hehe, even though I fear for the consequences for Matti boy *shivers deliciously*. I LOOOOVE Asher getting jealous. Oh the anticipation is killing me :DDDD

Whatever it will be it would a worthy Christmas present for all of us *coughs* LOL

BTW after you've finished this sequel I totally wouldn't mind to read an AU oneshot with a threesome hehe. Even though I admit up to this point it's difficult to imagine Asher and Vince in bed together. But those two together with Matt hmmm, now this sounds more reasonable. They could spar who can fuck Matti the best to make him climax harder hohohohoho. Sry, my dirty mind is running away with my mouth.

Love ya story, love ya characters, love ya!!!
person Reena
schedule December 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow wow wow!!This story just keeps getting better.Full of intense emotions and the pace of the chapter was perfect as always.At the end of the chapter i think Asher is talking about Sabrina,but you never know.A big congratulations on graduating:) and thanks for the chapter.
person asdf
schedule December 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
haha omg if next chapter is a reversal of asher being jealous i'll pee my pants.
congrats with your graduation!
person Hopesouth
schedule December 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Thanks for updating! Ultimately, of course, I want Matthew and Asher to find some sort of happiness, but I would love it if Matthew and Vincent actually get to sleep together first. Thanks for getting them close, anyway.
Chapter Title suggestion: Matryoshka
person afan
schedule December 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is one totally awesome story, well actually the prequel to this is stupendous as well. Cannot wait to see what comes next!
person Mint
schedule December 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter!!! I'm happy you're still going with it, and really hope you keep on writing.

Please update ASAP.
person Green Eliza
schedule December 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ruh Roh. Wonder what Asher found out about? I can't decide if I'm glad Matthew cheated a wee bit, because like him I'm pissed at Asher, or if I'm mad at Goomba for taking advantage. Or maybe I feel bad for Goomba.... either way, so glad you're back! Congrats on graduating with honors!
person Pansy
schedule December 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Mahsa, please don't let us wait for another long time for a new chapter. I feel like I'm dying here . Update soon. Give us a new chapter, please?
schedule November 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
For heavens sakes you're killing us, please update
(Whining)
person dd
schedule November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ermahgerd! I can't believe I missed an update. I was being very strict with myself and not checking for updates for soooo long. Thank you for updating, totally understand how busy things can get.

This new plan sounds scary. I hope they find Elena and/or off Carter. On one hand I love when Matthew hangs out with awkwardsexualtensionbuddy!Vincenzo, but this doesn't sound good at all.