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I fell in love with Muffin and now Matthew....I hope you will be updating this story again soon. I am really hooked and look forward to the next chapter so much it is ridiculous!

Sorry, if this is not the right place to post this, but I wanted to tell the author, that I absolutely enjoyed myself reading "Muffin" and "Matthew" as it's sequel.
I love the story, I love the caracters, I love the style...
Want I don't like are nasty cliffhangers with no clue of when the story will continue...lol
You really love torturing your readers, don't you?
Usually I skip uncompleted storys as I hate to finally discover, that what I'm reading is an abandoned story, but with this story I just couldn't resist and that at leaves me at your mercy, I guess.
Never mind if it takes a while, just do not abandon the story - It's way too good.
This is my very first review at this place , so you might take this as a comliment.
English is not my first language , so I beg your pardon for any mistakes.
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For me, the story and characters drive the story. I am invested in the characters I love, the story keeps me coming back, the sexy parts are definitely a bonus though, although I could never stop now even without them. I love the angst, the love and overall feel of the story. Definitely one of my favorites....

Thank u Mahsa for new update . I have a feeling you want to kill Vincenzo in the end. Please dont even think about it! dont kill him. Ok?!

OMG! What did Muffin do this time to make Asher mad? I can't wait to find out but I have to be patient again, right? Thank you for this chapter. Totally loved it. Matthew's jealousy is cute, naive and annoying.:-) Wish chapter 19 will come soon. And CONGRATULATIONS on your graduation.

I MUST BE A SADIST BECAUSE I LOVE YOUR STORYS AND CAN'T STOP READING THEM EVEN WITH THE TWISTED SADISTIC CLIFFIES!!! read ya laters!

Hello!!!!
I don't normally comment on the fiction I read but I'm truly stunned by the true talent shown by this author of this story. The cliff hangers are real and dangerously sharp, I l-o-v-e loved it!!!!

Mahsa! Congratulations on your graduation! And with honors! You should be proud of yourself! I bet your family is very proud of you. :)

Ok, now I have to read the latest chapter. I just wanted to write that b/c by the time I get to the end of the chapter, I'll have forgotten. :(

Mahsa!!!!!! What did he do???? What did he do????? What is Asher talking about??????????? Does he have eyes in the back of his head? lol

Omg, what an intense chapter!

Now that you graduated with honors (congrats again! :)), can you PLEASE update sooner??? Pretty please?????

Have a great Christmas and New Year's Mahsa! I'm on pins and needles now, I hope you're happy! lol

I was reading the other reviews after mine was posted, and I think it was amoxi, thought of something really good. Maybe Asher DID bug their hotel room, so he knew EXACTLY what they were doing!

Also, I forgot to mention this: when Sabrina (not the teenage witch, lol), Asher and Muffin were in the restaurant, and Asher went to get their drinks and Muffin was staring after him, Sabrina started talking to him. She wasn't upset with Muffin's behavior, just intrigued. She told him he didn't have to try so hard. I got the distinct impression that she knew Muffin was interested in Asher. Maybe after Vincenzo came by to drag Muffin away, Sabrina mentioned this to Asher. Maybe somehow she figured everything out, I don't know, but maybe that's why Asher's so pissed off. Maybe w/o even realizing he was doing it, Muffin ruined everything. Idk, just a thought...