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for Matthew

by kiyoai

person Nathaniel
schedule April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so glad to see you are still working on this. loving it still.
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me this isn't abandoned
person lucyno
schedule April 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i've rated this and muffin five stars on ten diff computers!! please update soon, this is one of my fave stories ever!
person Jono
schedule April 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am honestly tearing my hair out in frustration, since it seems you go out of your way to find new and inventive scenarios for Muffin to so utterly FUCK UP. When did he become so clingy and jealous?! Pitching a fit over being separated from Asher for a little while seems so illogical, even for him. And then his reaction towards Sabrina had me rolling my eyes so hard - YOU KNOW IT'S AN ACT, DUDE.

I left a similar comment, years ago, in the first story complaining about pretty much the same thing - the character remains so static, and seems to have not undergone ANY growth or change, at least when it matters.
person amadea
schedule April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
update pleaaaase ♡♡
person oo
schedule April 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That whole third wheel scene was hilarious. Argh, what does Asher think Matthew did?! Ha. Please update!
person oo
schedule March 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I've missed a lot of updates. Craaap. Now I have this urge to reread muffin, then Matthew all just to get caught up.
person Corina
schedule March 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon because this story is soooo amazing and I can't wait to see how Matthew messed up this time.I love the scenes between Vincenzo and Muffin.They are so cute.I hope to see more in the future ^^
schedule March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OK so I reread muffin and now just caught up on Mathew
please get me off the cliff and post a new chapter before I fall.
person Kortman
schedule March 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
My word, I have just spent the last couple days reading your stories, Muffin and Matthew. I most say I am in love with your writing style. It is completely captivating. I do hope you decide to continue writing this story because it is wonderful. I look forward to reading more!