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for Lying in Wait

by Keara

person ceedee
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet story. Anyanka and Sethe - I hope you write more about them .
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well I sure hope you manage to think of more! I loved this chapter, it was so sweet!
person Kylee
schedule December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. I enjoyed reading it. You did leave it a bit unfinished though especially since you promised us a sex scene. I hope you get inspired to write some more.
schedule December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please please please write more!!! I love this as a oneshot but I think it could be an awesome multichapter story!!!! =D
person Will Treaty
schedule December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, please don't leave it as a one-shot and continue. A Beautifully written story and adorable too.
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story and hope you write more about Anyanka and Prince Sethe's life together. I am wondering though why the King, his father, or anyone else for that matter never chose him in the harem. Beautifully written story and I hope to see more from you.
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was really beautiful! I hope you will continue! ^^
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderfully written and a delight to read!
More please!! ;)
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