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by Katiesroom

person jason
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this so far. everyone has that fantasy guy :) can't wait to see how this ends up!
person Sarkukka
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, had no idea Liam's such a slut and top. Good for him! \o/
Thanks for the smut! It's highly appreciated. ;)
Eagerly waiting next chapter. I hope sweety gets everything work out with Cameron.
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, you certainly know how to write smut! I think you can teach others. Seriously, Whew! lol What a chapter! Poor Liam, oh yeah, right, poor Liam! snicker, snicker. Maybe poor Ryan; after all, I think when he wakes up, he's gonna be upset that Liam up and left.

Yes, yes, looking forward to some more Cameron time. Cameron didn't seem so upset after Liam kissed him. Was he looking apologetic b/c he's NOT into Liam, (being straight and whatnot), or b/c he wanted to do more? Not sure if that last part made sense! lol

Anyway, awesome, awesome chapter! I did noticed one error tho: when Liam was sucking Justin, he said something to the effect: "...if sucking dick was a pass time..." It should have been past time.

Can't wait for the next update! :)
person Sarkukka
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor little Liam, his got all my sympathy. Cameron seems like nice person, thou his character is little vague cause of the first person angle. I'm sure it's going to be okey when the story goes on.
But this was interesting chapter and I'll really like to know what will happen next. Thanks for the update! And I wish for you best year ever so far!
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have one complaint: THE CHAPTERS ARE TOO SHORT!!!!! I want more!!!! lol

What a great story! You certainly know how to write great angst! From Sydney to Liam! lol

Well, that kiss was certainly surprising, for both of them! But it seems like Cameron didn't mind it in the least, otherwise he would have broken away sooner and thrown Liam off him.

Justin seems really nice; I hope Liam just doesn't "fuck him over" pardon the expression.

Great job; can't wait for the next chapter! :)
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lurrrve this. Loved the drunken kiss, knew he'd do it the moment he started drinking :D can't wait to see the response, and I'm hopin against hope that cam doesn't catch him with justin... Update soooooooon
person Mint
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dude you should update asap! Great job!
person MoonlitWorld
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
=O you evil evil eviill person. How can you leave it there! *sobs*
tension is so high! Ah can't wait for the next chapter =D
I love this story already lol chapters seems to be getting shorter?
Or is that just me, maybe I'm reading fast lol
please update soooon!
Keep up the Wicked Writing
xMoonlitx
schedule December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, poor Liam! I'm surprised Cameron hasn't picked up his infatuation yet. He's gotta come clean (haha, no pun intended), otherwise he's going drive himself crazy! :)

Great chapter, and if you don't update before Saturday, have a great Christmas if you celebrate it! :)
person Sarkukka
schedule December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well that's very interesting start. I'm willing to know what's going to happen.
Thanks for the new fic. Christmas got a bit early this year. ;)
Happy Holidays to you!