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September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Surprisingly, I loved it. It was. A little bittersweet for me, as in it bitch slapped me with realism, but I loved it never the less. Thanks for sharing.
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April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow that whole story was just amazing. im sorry its over but i love the ending. ill read your other stuff just cuz i liked this one so much but i doubt theyll compare! that was just too much good stuff, thankyou
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April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! its all like =SLAP!= he in love with his best friend! =SLAP!= that dudes only 17! =SLAP!= thats jordans brother! pow pow pow! so much fun
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April 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is exactly what ive been looking for on here! good first person stories and angstiness are harder to find than one might think...so kinda sucks to hear your usual stuff is "smuttastic romanticism" ha....theres enough of that all over the place. anyways, the story's really fun so far. good job
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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Beauty! Thanks for writing something that felt real. Loved it.
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April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!
It was very well written. Fantastic smut. Social awkwardness. Conflicts.
I wish my fic got HALF the reviews yours do. Keep it up! I want to read more!
It was very well written. Fantastic smut. Social awkwardness. Conflicts.
I wish my fic got HALF the reviews yours do. Keep it up! I want to read more!
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, well worth the wait! I'm so sorry that this story has come to an end; it was one of my favorites (along w/your Sydney/Cass story).
I'm so happy Ryan gave Liam a second chance; everyone deserves a second chance.
Awesome story; you are such a talented storyteller; I can't wait to read more from you! :)
I'm so happy Ryan gave Liam a second chance; everyone deserves a second chance.
Awesome story; you are such a talented storyteller; I can't wait to read more from you! :)
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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful. I've never actually cried reading something on this site but I most certainly reared up a few times in this. I font even care that it wasn't particularly smutty, it has a bitter innocence to it that just throws you into the shoes of the character. I'm sure we've all been in the situation where we love someone who couldn't possibly love us back, and yet it is so hard to write about it accurately. Ou acheived this accuracy and bittersweetness so perfectly. Brilliant job.
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March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The story is so gripping. I'm on the edge of my seat just waiting for the final chapter.
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March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
D: So sad! I'll be waiting for the happy ending :)