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oh, you can't stop there! ;)

omg! I love this story so much, it's my newest obsession, the one I can't WAIT for more chapters from! And your killing me with these short chapters!!!

Finally it comes out why he's running from his mate! How sad, everything and everyone just seems to be against him in his life. I hope our main character will find happiness one day.

That was a mean cliff !!
You need to update soon, now ! XDD

more.

Dun dun duuun. The story is as heart-breaking as ever and what a cliffy you left us. I'm afraid the mate will have his way with him and then lock him into a dungeon or something. Yeah, I'm overflowing with thrust to the guy. xC I still feel like Anon is trying to make something better and Shin doesn't realise it, but since Anon can't be trusted I also want Shin to stay away from him. I don't trust him not to be cruel. To think he orchestrated a mating for Shin so he could steal his baby. So did Yasuhiro ever love him, or was he just a job given to him by Anon? A traitor to be punished and fixed. It's hard to see it could have been anything else, which makes it all the crueler. Shin was being played from the start. For being the god of childbirth, Anon seems to be one bad mother. What is interesting is that Anon didn't mention the killing of his mate, only the child. From this I'm guessing killing a baby has some sort of spiritual ramification, no? But even if Anon were to, if this would actually be his intention, cleanse Shin from that sin, Shin has performed other abortions. Like what he did to Tsukiko. What about that? Though I don't trust Anon at all, even if he was trying to help Shin, I don't approve of the cruelty in his methods. As I see it, the one bearing the guilt of the killed child, is Anon's dead mate to begin with, and by extension even Anon for letting it happen in his own home to his own child by the hands of his own mate. Shin wasn't even sane when it happened, losing his sanity from all the rape, torture and stuff. I would really love to get some clarity about what Anon was thinking during that time, and if he knew it was happening. It will affect much of the way I view the guy. He would go from one cruel sadistic bastard, to one cruel, blind fool. Oh well, I guess I just need to read more to find out :3 Lol, this story gets me all riled up. Oh, and only last chapter did I realize what uragiri means. Lol, I’m so slow, ha ha.

Hey, this is an interesting story - one thing I noticed though is it's sometimes hard to tell if you're talking about something that happened in the past or if you're talking about something happening in the present.

I think it was a good chapter, but I.m eager to get to the island :-)

Next chapter please!

I'm really looking forward to see what's gonna happen in full moon???!!! :D Can't wait! :P

Gr8 as always! ;) Thanks for updating ^_^

This story is killing me with curiosity. I want more. What I’m hoping for is that Anon searches for Shin to heal their relationship, not to punish him. Though, I guess you can’t have too high hopes for someone who allowed a lover like that to ”care” for his kid. Yes. I have not gotten over that part.