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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooouch!he got hit ba y acar?p.s Edward CullenO_o?*bursts out laughing)
You have some grammar mistakes to fix, I suggest you get a beta.
Pavo is a good name, I don't even mind the snakebites(usually I find them a sign of immature ppl's writting and ppls who can't keep their fetishes ovo out of their fiction).
I like the fact Pavo works in baker, and the reason I read your story was the Mr.Darcy innuendo in th esummary.
Fix your English a.s.a.p!
It's a cute story so far, i wonder what happens next?Supernatural( B-guy is the Pan?I hope it wont be a vampire fic those are to common and cliche)
You have some grammar mistakes to fix, I suggest you get a beta.
Pavo is a good name, I don't even mind the snakebites(usually I find them a sign of immature ppl's writting and ppls who can't keep their fetishes ovo out of their fiction).
I like the fact Pavo works in baker, and the reason I read your story was the Mr.Darcy innuendo in th esummary.
Fix your English a.s.a.p!
It's a cute story so far, i wonder what happens next?Supernatural( B-guy is the Pan?I hope it wont be a vampire fic those are to common and cliche)
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very well written! Hope to see this continued.
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH please tell me you will update soon. I see much to come from this story and can not wait till my rabid book nerd is fed. thank you and good luck