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I hope you write more one shots like this one featuring Max and Jamie. I loved this.

reviewed in your forum. please check :)

- nekoii

Oh. My. Gods. That was incredibly, wildly HOT! Dear sweet gods, Jamie was just the most delicious sub, so wonderfully compliant even though he was also remarkably pissed off at Max. The entire scene left me absolutely drooling. The way you described things more in terms of taste, or heat, or sensation brought home that Jamie was blindfolded throughout the scene. And Max, clueless as he was, really came off as a decent person, if a tad over-eager. Jamie's tantrum had me actually applauding.

This was terrific!

Well, like I said before, I think it came out exceedingly well. And it really shows just how knowledgeable you are about BDSM. Plus, their relationship is just so realistic and vivid. You've done a great job!

This review's recaptcha words are thustre and Faculty. Hmmmmmmmmmmmm. I wonder if the recaptcha is sentient and is trying to give you ideas for your next piece? :D