rate_review Reviews

I love Riku's dark side. It's so devious. I hope Kauko's injury doesn't keep him out of Riku's bed long. I like the sex scenes although Kauko is so quick to finish. I think Damien should chill out a little. It's almost like he's high maintenance. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I really want to see how Kitin is punished and how Riku blows off steam. Please give me an update soon.

I want to see more of Riku's dark side. I just love how possessive he is of Kauko. I can't wait to see how the animosity between Kauko and Damien ends. I also want Kauko's inner sadist to show. That should be a wonderful read.

Please update soon.

personally, i don't think Riku is a really fleshed out character.

his speech is so 'refined' that it feels forced.

he says he's a devilish character who can be cruel, but when it came to dealing with Jin (who he kept saying he'd use as an example to show his "true side" to that K-dude), he really does nothing but pull out a gun. which he doesn't even use. that's not really scary or cruel to me. Damien's suggestion to let Jin suffer seemed more cruel to me than giving Jin a bullet.

i don't get it.

Riku mostly seems like a character to me who is mostly talk, but no action, ya know?

Lovely kinky character construction, intriging story line, Not sure if I like your ultimate "Master devil"...he might be just a little too devlish for me, but that doesn't mean he is not dangerousily interesting. Can't wait to read more, and find out who is the real uncover goody Spy LOL G

I'm a new reader and I'm loving this, can't wait for me and I'm glad the chapters are long, it gets me interested more! :)

xx

this story holds promise. but some constructive criticism- my issue with your writing is that all your dialogue is wooden. when i read the characters speak, it comes out in a monotone. it's very distracting. if you put some life into the way the characters talk, your stories would really shine.