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for Riku

by Nightwing

person Nbsiren
schedule April 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh boy, I wonder what he's going to tell her~
person Nbsiren
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update^^
person shelle
schedule August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this story has lost me originally it was supposed to be about Kauko now it seems like he's just an extra in a story
person emz
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kauko :hugs him:
I'm really curios about Kauko's origins now ~ haha , going to stalk you for a while :)
person OshieteOkureYo
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's like Kauko is getting progressively stupid and Riku flip-flops more than a politician.
person emz
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I missed some updates....*goes to read it* .
person emz
schedule February 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So Riku and Adrik have feelings for each other ?!. I ;m not a fan of Adrik so the whole chapter was like a slap . This is like the 3th ongoing story i am reading (usually i only read complete ebooks ), so i try to be patience and the waiting is killing me . Want more , and more K . Adrik and K will be intresting too , since Riku have some feelings for both of them (or i leat i think so )
schedule February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I don't know how it got so far along before it showed up on my radar. I feel bad not having reviewed until Chapter 14 but I didn't realize how much I had read until just now lol. Man, Damian is a habitual linestepper isn't he?! Like really, how many times is he going to have to warn you to stop being jealous and smacking you before you get the picture. Sheesh. I'm loving this story!
schedule February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really all it took was one slap to put Damian back in line?! You don't realize how relieved I was after that scene lol. He was hell bent on being a defiant badass! I realized this after my last review but the relationship between Riku and Damian is comical. I can tell you've worked a lot on character development. I laughed at Riku offering K a therapist or a tight embrace. It's hard to place Riku I keep thinking he's going to be really evil and sadistic but he's not. Sure he has dark ways but at least to K he's not that bad. I like the balance between his evil ways and libido lol.
person smint45
schedule January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh the fight was just great!!! I really liked the way Riku used kaukos soul for battle!!! I so can't wait for kaukos introduction as master!!! that will probably be really entertaining!!!! Can't wait for more!!! See you again soon!!!