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for The boss' youngest brother

by Laevi

schedule June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
awesomely hot first chapter.
person Jamie Weaver
schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok wow i couldnt believe they actually broke up but the happy ending was great
person Susan
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story! So sweet and sad and best of all, a happy ending! :)
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. Hot n actually quite sweet.
xx gg
person eatmorefish
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow i never thought that 7 chapters would pack so much emotion!!! this is my favorite story from you! Well done :)
person kylee123
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely new story Laevi. Excellent writing. I am on chapter 2 and I love it so far.
person kylee123
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The story is beautiful and it appeals to me in so many ways. First of all, I just love the setting of the ship for Jake's home. Very unique and interesting. You had another story about shipmates that I also enjoyed reading. I love Jake's mysterious character. I would love to eventually learn why he has to bury his past. I also love the situation with the May December romance. I can understand why Mel sees Jake as the devil incarnate. The story is sweet and full of heartache at the same time. This one is a real winner.
person Koira
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A ship with no facilities...? That screams for a watersports fantasy... :) I just moved to the Netherlands this year and I'm already happy to see this great country in fiction!
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg, what an awesome story! It made me laugh, it made me cry, it made me cry, and cry.....

What a great story; I'm sorry it's over! Great job! :)
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing story of two poeple fallign in love and defeating all that lay in their path. I was hooked to this story from the first sentence. I almost cried when Jake and Tim broke up and I'm still grinning now knowing they got back together. What I liked most about this story was how believeable the chacaters were and how even though I have never been in love, I could understand their feelings for each other. It was so real and so sweet and the sex was so hot! Well done, I give you ten million stars.