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I love this story so much!

I wonder what is behind the door.

Cant wait for more!

wow! really GOOD story, this woodbury seems like a really intriguing town... is it really a town? I mean, can something with only 85 people be really considered a town? when I imagine a town with 85 people you know what comes to my mind? the wild west of ancient movies... with saloons in the middle of the desert, cowboys and everything!

wow, really cool story

I don't know why, but I got the feeling that roger's son was looking for that "diary thingy"...

but I noticed you haven't updated your stories in a while... please update! your stories are great!

Omg, you took wayyyyy too long to update this! :(

This was such an awesome chapter! Why the heck would Roger's son want to go thru the boxes? He's gotta be looking for something in there...maybe the diary. Speaking of which, maybe the entries w/the x's and o's are like hugs and kisses. Maybe they have something to do with WHO Rose was with at the time. Maybe the x is one person and the o is another. Or maybe like the tic-tac-toe game. Idk, just spewing out stuff. This is such a mystery; I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

this is a true mystery fic.Still noone has a clue what's going on.Every chapter another question to be answered, hopefully, in the next one.Good job.

Omg, don't tell me the missing girl is in there! lol

Why didn't Ben want to find out more about the missing girl? Wasn't she in his aunt's house? I'd be mighty curious!

Great chapter; can't wait for more! :)

Very interesting and amusing new story. I would love to read some more. I am very curious to see what is behind the closed door. Does Benjamin have to go outside to go between the first and second floors in that house? That must have been hard on his old aunt. In chapter 1 where he calls the lawyer Dr. Peters - usually lawyers are not given the title of Dr.

ooOOoo What an interesting start...can't wait for more.

Great start! I can't wait to read more. :)