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September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this story!! It's totally different from everything else I've read.
Will Azi ever retrieve his youth? and his name???? and his treasure, will there be a time when he could call 'it' his own?
It's really a nice story, with a bitter-sweet taste to it. nothing is predictable.
plese, update soon =D
Will Azi ever retrieve his youth? and his name???? and his treasure, will there be a time when he could call 'it' his own?
It's really a nice story, with a bitter-sweet taste to it. nothing is predictable.
plese, update soon =D
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September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story. I enjoy the fairytale aspects. The character of Azi is amazing. Please continue when you can as I really am looking forward to more.
Happy writing,
C. Reed
Happy writing,
C. Reed
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September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very interesting fic this one, i hope it updates more often
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September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I prefer this over Juicy Fruit because drugs and BDSM are not my cup of tea, and I guess old guys that are actually ancient dragons are my cuppa. LOL. I wish this was updated more often, but we all have other things to do. I'm just happy you update at all. :)
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July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. The dialogue is fascinating and Azi is just so cute!
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July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really enjoy this story. It's a bit depressing, but I'll always have a love of dragons and their possessive ways. I want for Ari to be happy and for that annoying birdbrain to learn to stop insulting him. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I love your crazy dragon dude! His dialogue is so, is so! It shows that he's from a different time period compared to Owen and Greg. It's wonderful characterization. Hahaha, the awkward dinner with Greg. It's so adorable how Owen is trying to show off Azi (so cute), and Azi getting jealous quite funny as well. I love their interactions. I really like where this is going! I'm looking forward to your next chapter. :]
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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh the drama! I didn't expect Greg, strangely enough (because Owen is young, healthy and hot, so why not?), but I feel sorry for poor Azi. I hope he won't break and kill him, because I'm not so sure Owen would forgive him... Although Birdbrain would approve, the little sadist (but quite a funny one too).
Is the earthquake related to Azi's rage or is it just a regular one? Or maybe caused by someone else? I've been thinking that it would be kind of cool if Azi met another mythical being or dragon, because of the consequences it could have. Azi can't really be the last one, can he? Maybe if he regains power thanks to Owen, it will attract other creatures (other than mice, insects and greedy crows, I mean). I quite like the idea of these supernatural beings living hidden in our modern societies- a concept that appealed to me in Haunted City too.
Also, it's always a bit ambiguous the way Owen accepts Azi's ideas of dragons, etc, but in a probably comical way. It seems to me that as a scientist he can't really believe that sort of things, but he would secretly like to because it would just be awesome and a fantastic discovery (and any geek's dream too).
And what's with Azi's insistance on Owen being a dragon slayer? Shouldn't he be more careful about putting such thoughts in the one he loves? Or does he want to die? I hope he's not suicidal, even though he seems a bit defeated sometimes. I'm really fond of him, and it's a bit like Beauty and the Beast - you want the Beast to get the girl (guy here). ;)
So into this story - next chapter, please?
Is the earthquake related to Azi's rage or is it just a regular one? Or maybe caused by someone else? I've been thinking that it would be kind of cool if Azi met another mythical being or dragon, because of the consequences it could have. Azi can't really be the last one, can he? Maybe if he regains power thanks to Owen, it will attract other creatures (other than mice, insects and greedy crows, I mean). I quite like the idea of these supernatural beings living hidden in our modern societies- a concept that appealed to me in Haunted City too.
Also, it's always a bit ambiguous the way Owen accepts Azi's ideas of dragons, etc, but in a probably comical way. It seems to me that as a scientist he can't really believe that sort of things, but he would secretly like to because it would just be awesome and a fantastic discovery (and any geek's dream too).
And what's with Azi's insistance on Owen being a dragon slayer? Shouldn't he be more careful about putting such thoughts in the one he loves? Or does he want to die? I hope he's not suicidal, even though he seems a bit defeated sometimes. I'm really fond of him, and it's a bit like Beauty and the Beast - you want the Beast to get the girl (guy here). ;)
So into this story - next chapter, please?
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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing.
I just don't even know how to explain.
It's just... How did you come up with this? It's simple yet fantastical.
I'm actually enjoying this so much :)
I just don't even know how to explain.
It's just... How did you come up with this? It's simple yet fantastical.
I'm actually enjoying this so much :)
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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey! You don't know me, or maybe you do, I'm boneform over on The Slash Pile. I made an account here specifically for this haha.
Anyway, what I wanted to say is that I love your writing. Some of your stories aren't my thing, but they're all so well-written and the characters are dynamic and I could gush all night long like a teenage girl but I think you probably get this all the time. Right now my vice is Treasured but I read Cat's Cradle last night and that might become my second. ANYWAY, enough of me gushing. Take care and keep writing :)
Anyway, what I wanted to say is that I love your writing. Some of your stories aren't my thing, but they're all so well-written and the characters are dynamic and I could gush all night long like a teenage girl but I think you probably get this all the time. Right now my vice is Treasured but I read Cat's Cradle last night and that might become my second. ANYWAY, enough of me gushing. Take care and keep writing :)