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for Treasured

by Jblueblue

person B
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome .
Yes. This is so many kinds of awesome mashed up together I can't do anything but squeal and leave an adoring comment, urging you to keep going.
Azi, stop being old already. Greg, I'm truthfully sorry for you.
Writer, you are so amazingly original. Looking forward for an update!
person RJaneyP
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is good but for some reason it makes me sad , somehow I want it to end good. I like your old monster, it seems to me he needs a little happiness before goes forever. G
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so anxious to see where this all goes. This is such a unique story and I find myself overjoyed whenever I see an update. Thank you so much for the update. I can't wait for the next one. :D
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited to see where this is going.
person Anon
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. I initially thought from the description that this wouldn't be a story for me, but I am absolutely enthralled, and can't wait for the next update!
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uh Oh, he's going senile...
person Althydia
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you're back! :)
I feel so sorry for Azi, though... Owen trying to help him is just more sweet torture to him. And I hope he doesn't snap when Greg comes! Owen would not like that...
With things as they are, I wonder how Azi is going to recover and if he'll ever get his whole power back?
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, you ahven't wrote in a while. And I've been itching to make this mystery go away.
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aahh! Updatedddd!
I loved everything about this chapter (and all the chapters before, if I'm honest), Azi is such an amazing character, and Owen's just lovely!
I can't wait to see what happens between them, if Azi ever gives in to his urge, or if he makes himself suffer and restrains himself for a time. I try to imagine how it will go but nothing I imagine comes close to your amazing writing (and I'm sure it never will).

I really do wish this was updated more often, but when I read it, I understand why it might be a difficult one to write up,
aside from the obvious reason that you have other things to do. The style of writing for Azi's point of view is flawless, but it looks like it could be one of the more difficult styles of writing, very different from your others. Treasured remains my favorite fiction, and I really hope you don't give it up and instead, keep trying on it.

Thank you SO much for the update, I can't wait for the next, but it'll be worth it when it's here.
Less-Than-Three <3
-tex.
person spex
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is such a beautiful story <3