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for Treasured

by Jblueblue

person rikitiki
schedule November 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yey! Update! Im really intrigued with this story!
person Diablo
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
GOD FUCKING DAMNIT. I WAIT FOR EVER AND WHAT YOU GIVE ME IS A TEASING GESTURE. GHOST. SWEET PEA. I HAVE MADE YOU ART. I WILL SHOW IT TO YOU IF YOU GIVE ME ANOTHER CHAPTER. IT IS A DRY POINT PRINT. IT IS BEAUTIFUL. IT'S NOT DONE BUT IF THERE IS MORE I WILL GIVE IT TO YOU. No seriously I am in need of more of this! It has been a YEAR. I just want to know what HAPPENS. I want to see if Azi just fucking explodes and suddenly shows everyone that he IS a dragon under all that human age and sadness. That he exists as he once was in full. Or if he doesn't, if he just stays as he is, and sort of wastes away (not that I believe you would do that). I just NEED TO KNOW, OKAY?
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh~! I adore you. And I adore Azi and Owen, too. When you said you had an update for Treasured coming along, I was practically bouncing around the room. I'm wondering if Owen genuinely believes Azi is a dragon, or if he's just indulging an old man his fairy tails. I love how drawn he is to Azi, though. Like he can't help himself.
Seems like Azi's slowly, very slowly, getting back to his old (Young!) self the longer he stays with Owen.
I love the way Azi talks, too ._. But I think I've said that before. >.>
Woohoo! OwenAzi love.
<3<3<3
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so ridiculously much. And I really don't know what else to say, except that I can't wait for azi to get stronger, and for things to become more and more difficult. Will he destroy the world, or is he finally past that stage in his life? :) Love it, love it, love it. And I hope you finish this beautiful story soon.
person dut
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow wow... this is fabulous story!!! Ive read other dragon stories but not like this one.. Gosh I hope you will update the next one soon! Love love this story!
person GreenEliza
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Gosh I love this story. I love all your stories! I love the way you write and how poetic everything is. If you were published I would buy everything!! But I especially love Azi. I love how he's getting more aggressive/assertive and I love that Owen doesn't put up with any of his shit. True love.

muah! Thanks for updating!
person Althydia
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Glad you're back! Your story keeps me wondering, guessing, and yearning for more... A truly brilliant read.
The bond between Owen and Azi is getting stronger, it seems, but I wonder if Greg notices the changes in Azi (at least physically) since he has more distance than Owen? Also, with the tension mounting, when will things get out of hand (on a dragon-on-a-rampage scale, I mean)? Will Azi ever take the form of a dragon? And will Owen be able to resist him? And will poor Greg survive the whole thing? He's such a nice guy, but I'm still conflicted about him because the relationship between Owen and Azi truly fascinates me...
Well, thanks for sharing, and see you next chapter!
schedule November 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm SO SO glad you are updating! PLEASEEEE KEEP GOING! Also, if I can please second Diablo's review--if only to express how much I love ALL your stories but particularly this one.

XOXO
person Rustaam
schedule November 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much, and even though you don't update often, every time you do I get excited. Azi is finally making a move. Is he getting younger?
schedule November 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMFG. You updated. I seriously thought it was abandoned, which was depressing because I LOVE this story.

Looks like Azi is regaining a lot of his mojo. I can hardly imagine him as an old man anymore; I keep picturing a tall, dark, and handsome stud muffin. What's Owen going to do? He's obviously attracted to Azi, yet he says he loves Greg. I can't wait for the next chapter, which I hope isn't too far in the future.