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for Treasured

by Jblueblue

person Avernion
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the "crazy heavy syntax" stuff. more than if you had writen something sexy/funny. This chapter was a wonderful buildup. Don't change it :3
person Toni
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I didn't realise this was you :)
I like it. It interests me :)
person GellyBelly
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's been great so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, this is really interesting. I'm excited to read more about this old Dragon and Owen. I feel kinda bad for the Dragon.
person JJ
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good start...all very mysterious...I wonder what his name is...I hope Owen might be able to help...I did like the part when the man talked with the crow...
person RT
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This sounds interesting, but a dark tale? I wonder what will happen. D: