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Hurray! You used 212! I wonder if you're going to use her more? The chapter was brilliant. Almost exactly the way I'd imagined it.

I anticipate seeing what's going to happen to Zoe and what that other girl that was talking to Helen earlier has to do with anything.

A nice wrap-up to the first part! I can't wait to see what poor Zoe has to go through next, what with that nice, prepared anus she now has!

@varietyoflife: I really love that idea but I was afraid that it sounded a little too...far-fetched, I guess. I'm going to be perfectly honest: I'd let that Helen woman do whatever she wanted with me. Sometimes truth is stranger than fiction hahaha

Aww poor claire, so close to escaping yet so far. The last chapter was well worth the wait. Can’t wait to see what comes next.Hey you mentioned me in your author’s note, I was like hey, I’m number 18, lol.
@Femanon -I like that idea, A new girl that’s completly obiedient to Helen, but instead of her trying to gain helen’s trust so she can escape, she love’s it. She loves the abuse and craves more, it’s the only way she can get off. She is helen’s dream, the ultimate submissive : )
@Hoop-I love how in the chapters you create a vivid picture of the girls pain and unwanted pleasure, but what about, helen. We know she’s enjoying torturing the poor girls, how about helen experiencing the big O, while torting one of them, show how sick and devious she really is,or is that just me, lol. just a thought : ) More discipline exercises, like balancing a cup of water in their palms w/o spilling or something like that, if they do it wrong, they suffer consequences : )

I look forward to this story (because I am just that sick). So are you going to continue?

This is awesome! It's like Saw, but with sexy young girls and with orgasms instead of death. You should just keep going cause no matter how twisted and vile it is, that's what makes it so brilliant

I think it would be interesting to introduce a girl who's been there for awhile and been completely broken. She's completely subservient to Helen but, really, she's just trying to earn a little trust so she can escape somehow. (I've thought about this. This is who I'd been captured. Enjoy it while you can, ne?) If you use this idea all I ask is that her number be 212. It fits, to me. XP

Out of all the bdsm stories I’ve read and/or searched for, this is by far the greastest one ever : ) I really love your writng. It really paints a picture of what is happening to these girls, you can almost picture it in your mind. It seems you have a great knowledge of all the different types of bondage devices and torture scenarios, almost as if this is a real life experience....hmm.... your’re helen aren’t you, come on, you can tell me, lol. (if you are a male writing this amazing story, sorry I called you helen, lol). Keep up the good work, I check almost everyday for updates? I’m dying to know what’s going to be the next chapter after the game theory. If you need any suggestions how about another piercing for claire...but in a more sensitive area ; ) Keep doing what you're doing to have all of us hooked so good :)

Yay! You used Milking! I don't know if it was because I suggested it or if you'd already had it planned but I'm so glad! <3

And enemas. You really know what you're doing. I kinda want to know what Helen and that other woman were talking about. Will we meet other girls? What does the other woman do? Is she nicer or just slower? What is the grand plan for these girls?

I anticipate your next update!

Still enjoying your story please keep up the good work. It's very different.