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by Hoopyloop

schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well that was interesting. Will we get to see a chapter where we find out what happened to Laura while Claire was strapped down? I hope so.
person Femanon
schedule May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hoop really~
Update please...
schedule May 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
keep it up please i love this story
person Femanon
schedule March 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until the next chapter~

This one was very good at setting up the situation. I love how Claire is slowly getting Stalkholme's. And it's nice to see Laura again. It feels like it's been awhile.

Also I love how I have no idea what day it's been, how long they've been there. It really makes me feel like I'm in there with them, completely unaware of how time's passing. Very nice work.
schedule March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hoop, its my birthday this month on the 27th, you know you want to release a chapter in march. You knooowww ittt
person @_@
schedule February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
the suspense...can't wait to see what Helen has cooked up for the next day.
person varietyoflife
schedule February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay, we got an UPDATE, we got an UPDATE, lol. It was soooo Good. Can't wait to read what happens next. : )
person Femanon
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
:'D I'm almost crying with joy. Thank you so much for updating, and it was such a wonderful update, and we saw more of 212. I guess she's not the perfect little pet after all. Every person has their weaknesses and it looks like our dear 212 is going to have to do some pushups, huh? hahaha

I await yet another beautiful update. I pray to whatever being may or may not be out there that it come swiftly.
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh, if only you knew how much my heart jumped when I saw there was a new chapter. Thank you, thank you, thank you Hoop!

I read this almost just after you posted it and, of course, I locked my door immediately so my visiting family wouldn't disrupt me from my reading. I can honestly say I was not disappointed!

This was a very necessary chapter. I appreciate the smut, oh so lovingly done by Helen... It was perfect. Of course Helen would know how to do the best job. It sent chills down my spine when she said that Claire had no choice in the matter of whether or not she enjoyed it. Claire did enjoy it, and she didn't have time to fight it or fake it. Claire was completely taken advantage of. I still feel like she's Helen's favorite. ;D

I love how Helen relishes the moment that each girl breaks. Thats the best part isn't it? It's boring being on top with no challenges, but it's invigorating to win. I can't wait until Zoe wakes up.

I love the end of this, how she actually cuddles around Claire like a body pillow instead of leashing her to the bedpost like 202. I wonder how you break an already submissive person?

I can't wait to find out.

Thanks for updating!
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person Recal
schedule February 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Come on Hoop! Leave a review and tell us what's up! If you don't, I'm going to start leaving prompts!!