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Yes, were're waiting. Your loyal fans are waiting. :-D

Hoop, we're ready whenever you are. :)

YAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!! I so wanna find out about the girls on the outside. Where do they come from? How did they get there? Where are their families? Or maybe they can turn the tables and manage to overtake Helen and torture her...

Thank you so much Hoop! I'm honored you would actually send out another chapter for my birthday. :) You're awesome.

This chapter was amazing! Great twist ending, awesome train of thoughts from Zoe. I like how you pose the action as a necessary evil for Zoe, something that she can explain later to Laura. I also like how being in Helen's facility has changed her to where she would rather not be responsible for the other girls being sent to sensdep, but sees it as more merciful than whatever Helen might do to them.

My only mention is that the first paragraph feels a touch out of place, like its from a slightly different perspective.

Other than that, its been an amazing chapter! I worry that Helen's fall may mean we're nearing the end of the story arch or the beginning of Zoe's life of extreme pain as Helen's personal footstool. (And then what would happen to the new doctor? Ooooo.)

Forgive me for any errors in this post, I'm typing from my phone on vacation in Canada lol.

That ending was well worth the wait. "Head butted Helen as hard as she could"!!! OMG!!! I can't wait to read whats gonna happen next.

I can't believe it's been a year already since I last begged you for a birthday chapter. (: Where did the time go?

An update? Oooh hurray!

As per usual, wonderful work. Definitely worth the wait, and of course you leave a cliffhanger for us. Haven't we suffered enough, Hoop?? *cries into space, shaking a fist*

I was entirely too happy to see this chapter up. Thank you Hoop! I'm glad you're still continuing it.

I love the new girl, she's in denial. I wonder if she's younger than Zoe. She definitely seems much more guillable. Her schemes are pretty obvious too, even though she realized the camera she was still acting suspicious enough for Helen to come by personally and ask her about it.

I give all my props to Zoe, she is in my top three favorites. She is the only one with consistent attempts at escape and trickery.

Also, nobody can fool Helen, she's omnipotent. I can't wait until the new scientist finds that out for herself. Helen has become increasingly dangerous; Zoe's work combined with the new 'better' chemist's is definitely a frightening idea. Would she really use the drugs on the new girls? Yes. Knowing Helen she will probably force Zoe to be there too.

Laura, you're in trouble. I wonder, if Claire sits in on this upcoming scene, would she feel the conditioning from earlier? It would be neat to see that work; I'm sure Helen would be overjoyed with herself. It was Laura's screams particularly she had been conditioned to, and I'm sure that whatever docile Zoe is going to have to do will not be entirely pleasant for either of them.

My suspicions seem to be confirming themselves. Helen has a distaste towards men sexually, evident also in the chapter where she punished the attendant.

ANYWAY, you made my night. I hope you're enjoying your holidays!

Update please!

What will happen next? Will the girls get free at last?
I also wanted to know a little more about "212"? Was she as obedient as now from the start? or maybe she resisted too much and Helen put her under so much pressure that made the girl become such obedient.
By the way, your writing is really great.