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by DevilinTheBones

person GlenGirl
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very well written! This was an arousing piece. Keep going!
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter and eagerly await the second. I'm interested how this will turn out!

Winter x
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
man this is a great beginning of an kick ass stpry just think each chapter she get volited in different rooms and places
schedule November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, will there be a chapter two, or will we be left with a good throat fucking and no sex? Not the concept needs it, given its PWP, but maybe learn a bit more about the ghost and girl. His death maybe. Sorry I'm a plot bunny hunter. I like to see good stories given good plots.
person Julia
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Great first chapter! Please go on and write some more!!!

It's written very good and so very hot!!

So please continue! (Pretty please!)