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by melbell20

person Sart
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh,I just adore your story!
I love how strong she is,even when frightenedshe won't be cowed! I like strong female characters,and your story seem to have that in abundance. Then to our leading man... seductive, yet all the while he makes me want to tear out my hair in frustration and sympathy with Katherine. The plot really has a dark undertone and mystery that I find quite compelling! can't wait to read the next chapter! Thanks for sharing your story:)
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i hope you continue this story. its really good starting point.
person Persephone
schedule February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story and am VERY curious as to why Cade kidnapped Katherine! I love the era you are setting this story in as well! Hope to see another update soon! This story is marvelous :)
person Anon
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fuck... That was good... It leaves me itching for more can't wait to read it!
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really want to know what happens!! This story is going to be SO good, I can already tell!! Please keep going!!
person MissMiki
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh i cannot wait to read more!! it was lovely :) though he's a bit...annoying??hahah he's just a bit ridic ;) cannot wait to read more!
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
precioso, pero todabia no sabemos porque la rapto y donde la lleva, espero que muy pronto nos regales otro capitulo, sin demora, estare esperando muy ansiosa, ana maria
person betrayed
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i rather like this story :) which doesnt happen too much out of all that ive read :) please update sooner than once a month
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This looks like it is going to be a fun story! I can't wait for your next chapter!
person allison
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING!