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November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your prose are beautiful as always. I can't stop thinking of comics when I read them. I go a little pissed when people say I deserve more reviews on anything, (what's that mean?) But no really you do. My only thought is that I read this piece out loud and maybe you might want to break up you sentence structure a little bit. Some short and some long might make the flow a bit better. But as always very dark and lovely.