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for Wilds Born

by Aya

person Anon
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it was a good petting scene.not akward ata all;)But God, was that a terrible cliffhanger.What happens now?
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7. I can hear Nu yelling, "Don't take my El!" at Layaent while kicking his buttoms. LOL
person Anon
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, Lay.. wants El?What does that mean?
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woo~ love the big words~ got me all goose bumpy like with a chill for more updates. [:D] I know who the cousin is!!! hehe~ and just to make sure, i'm gonna go re-read the chapters and your A/N to make sure i'm putting up the right answer. so cya in a few!
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow what a brutal beating.
I can't wait for more of this story.The last one tweak had me confused with al the power-tech explanations and wooden character but this one has me tied to the chair from the beginning to the end.
person Anon
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the two of them to meet.
schedule November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1. Woot! Go Ayato go! You've got my full support *shakes pom pom* and I'll be cheering for you! Love how this ended, the beginning a taste from the other side of the lake and review with the ending of a nice boom-it-was-accidental. I'm am more than looking forward to the continuation of Wilds Born. Highly anticipating the second chapter and what your world will bring us.