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I was so glad you are writing this story again, I was really into the story and than quickly realized there was no way this story was ending in 15 chapters. I think I might have to reread the entire story again, I am semi uncertain why Yao would be one of the people that is needed for the future of the tribe.

I love you Two Lovers universe! This is now my second round reading them and I find them really enjoyable. I'd love to read how this story ends. I'd like to find out how this storys civilization ended. Please continue writing this. Thanks!

omg this is so nerve racking is a good way mind you i hope u continue soon really want to know what happens

Nooooo! It ended there! D: This needs to be continued! But, after the four current stores your doing, since I'm reading those too. >.> But it still saddens me that it ended here :C I wanted to see El go and live in the wild! And hopefully Layaent will go live in the wild finally!

I love this story so far can not wait until the next update! I am particularly fond of where this story has lead to. The continuation of the generations. Keep up the fantastic work.!

I love the world you have built with this story and others. I particularly like how you can read one story without having read all of the others (although it obviously helps!). I don't know how you keep track of everything as you're writing so many stories at once!!!

Anyway am really enjoying wilds born, love your work!!!

Chapter 15. Love Mally!

....Wow... The new Mally is a monster... No other way to describe it. But she's a pleasant and refreshing surprise as well. I'm glad to see that Nu is going to go through the second growth like Shin did. It does make me wonder if this is something that will always happen to the ring bearer. Thank you for the update!!

OK typically I don't miss an update but some how I managed to miss this one and it has pissed me off. I have been waiting for an update for this and I missed it! Now that I'm done rambling lets get to my thoughts on this chapter. First you packed this chapter full of useful information. I really hope Nu does do something horrid to those government bastards. I found it funny that Nu has an outer inner dialogue with the ring. Also the government wants to get rid of clear skin... and everyone has power in some form. I laughed. That meant the government was going to get massacred for what they are trying to do.

Please update this again after you return from your holiday!

Mothers. We do like to get in the way of fun with safety rules. lol. poor poor El had his fun interrupted. :-) nicely done story so far looking forward to the rest.