rate_review Reviews

I do like how you did research on Pheromones on how homosexuals do react differently to Pheromones than straight men do

the only question is why rename Pheromones to Aphrodisiacs when the are the same thing?

other than that you did good liked the ending

I liked the "More realistic version" quite a bit. I'm into the humor in this story and could really see it as a longer bit--would love to have these guys' personalities developed. LOVE LOVE your drawing style and the pairing of story with illustration.

Interesting concept. The idea to this story is good, but it was a bit rushed. You could have done a lot with it had you just stayed a bit longer with the characters and events. Now, it seems a little more like a draft. A good draft. But a draft :3 I can easily see this turning into a 3-5 chapter story xD For example, One chapter about the hunter and his life, struggling with who he is and also about how well this job works for him. Another chapter could then be about the vampire and his struggle to survive. A third chapter about the “big fight”, another chapter for the hunter’s struggle with this new life and the vampire’s thoughts of having to feed on the hunter who killed those who had helped him survive. Then there can be one where they reach a compromise or contentment. xD See. *Nudge nudge* It’s not like I love vampire stories or anything. It’s not like I’m curious and would like to see more. By no means am I butting in...

:3

Also, on a side note, it wasn’t possible for me to see the pictures :C The links didn’t work for me ;A;