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by KaticaLocke

person Mischief2459
schedule October 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 31

 

 

 

 

Please continue this or at least post a summary ending. I want to know if Izeri becomes a shark, stays a shival or something else, and if Charias finds out the truth and still loves him.

person Kali
schedule October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like the slow burn of this story, and the main relationship. Shower scene was hot as hell. More, please!
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing! I cannot wait to read more! Please update as soon as possible.
person Lola
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I Love your work !!! I bought your book Brocken Wings. Will you someday write a sequel from Broken Wings ?, i enjoyed so much Jack and i would like to know how his relationship will work in the future, falls they marry . Of course I like Moonlight too and all your world you created abou them.
person Anonymous
schedule September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, great story, and I love your writing. I did want to point out that when treating hypothermia in humans (and I know it might be different for fey!), that one should never immerse them in hot water because it can cause heart arrhythmia. You first want to get the person indoors and out of their wet clothes and dry, but with them moving as little as possible so the colder blood in their extremities doesn't overwhelm their heart. Warm their trunk first, then their arms, hands, legs and feet, by wrapping the person in blankets or dry clothing. Other measures for treating victims of hypothermia can be found online. Can't wait to read more!
schedule September 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Are you planning on finishing this? I'd really like to read it, but I know me, and I can't start it if it's abandoned. It LOOKS that way, but I know looks can be deceiving. Please, if you're still working on this, could you e-mail me so I know it's ok to read it? I read Broken Wings YEARS ago, and I'm still in love with it today. It will always hold a very special place in my heart.

My e-mail is Kaidachan_@hotmail.com and I'll be looking everyday for a response to this, I just KNOW it. PLEASE let me know whether or not you plan to finish this.
person Lola
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hallo katica, i read Moonlight and After Broken Wings, I loved it very much. i will buy the book, because I want to have it and to support your work. Please someday could you Write more about Jak, Akitra and Maika's Life in the future ? I would love to see more of them, if Maikas plan to make a secret of all them will be possible? I prefer they will be Open about their relationship. Can they be pregnant of Jak ? I love too Moonlight and I hope they will soon be together. Thank you for your work !!!!!
person TRUgrit
schedule April 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aww! One step closer! I love Izeri's dry humor and how he's funny without trying. I can't wait for more of them together!
person SunaoTsuji
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was so sweet of Charias. I forgot what chapters I was reading but that was so sweet! Charias is so sweet to Izeri. Their scavenger hunt is so adventurously epic I wish I was doing that assignment. I can't wait to see how they get together and the mayhem along the way! Thank you for the updates! <333
person SunaoTsuji
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17-18. Or was it Chapter 16-18? OMG! Their relationship is growing on me. I wasn't sure how their relationship was going to work out and with the way you build their characteristics that make them unique unto themselves, I'm in love. The way you spin your words are beautifully intertwined with your character's growth that I'm envious of your talent for words and writing. Or it may just be that my vocabulary isn't big enough and I'm living in two different culture. LOL! Thank you very much for the update. Been having tension headaches recently and your updates make my days better. Greatly appreciate it! <333 Keep up the awesome writing!