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Well, hopefully things won't get out of hand at the club and James won't get jealous if Hector (is that his name?) is there and dances with Devin. Not that James has a right to be jealous, but I know he would feel jealous if some other guy is all over Devin.

And I still can't get over how cool Chris is being with all of this. Letting the "competetion" live with them is gotta be hard on him. I guess it's what they say, "keep your friends close, and keep your enemies closer", hahah. :)

Congratulations on completing the story Allison. I can't wait to see how you end things with these crazy boys. I get the feeling that things are going to get kind of hot at the nightclub.

James is one brave dude. I don't think I could do that. He came to a very mature decision to not date either one of them.

I wonder if he'll be able to stick with it. lol

Allison you are amazing. This story has my brain all tied up in knots. Love can be so painful. I wonder if Devin and James will be able to get past their problems. I think everyone is probably frustrated with Devin right now. Poor Chris is probably getting ready to kick them both out. I think James is right to take a step back and to take another look at both possible relationships. Good job writing. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

I'm starting to hate Devin reeeaaaaly bad....

I am happy that Devin and James are back together but I feel so sorry for Chris. I think Chris deserves a very big reward for being such a gentleman. Devin should not be acting like such a brat towards Chris when all of the problems are due to his screwing up. I would actually love to see to Devin and Chris and James threesome. Chris definitely deserves some loving. I am surprised that Devin could not pleasure James without feeling insecure. I understand his feelings but I think that the fact that James saved himself for him is enough. If James was simply horny, he could have been with Chris at anytime over the past few weeks. Anyway I can't wait to see what you have planned for these guys Allison.

Well, I'm actually surprised Devin left James all hot and bothered. But I really think James wanted Devin, not Chris. James could have done something w/Chris this whole time and he didn't.

this chapter was basically exactly the same as last. same words same sex same pattern of events..

So, I was suppposed to be watching my kid wrestle, but instead I was reading your latest chapter!

I'm a romantic; I'm glad Devin and James got back together, although I do feel bad for Chris. Chris really took it well; especially since he's letting James stay there AND letting Devin move in! What a guy! lol

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