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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, so glad these boys finally got their shit together! I hope everything goes well for them! lol
Allie, good luck with the book and I'll look forward to reading more from you; you're a very talented writer! :)
Allie, good luck with the book and I'll look forward to reading more from you; you're a very talented writer! :)
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter Allison. It made me want to cry for our two lovebirds. I hope one day they will be able to look back on this as the biggest challenge to their relationship. I am glad that Chris and Hector are getting close. The adoption part was so sad. Great writing Allison. I hope to see a next chapter soon.
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, it seems that James has forgiven Devin. They just have to take things slow.
I feel so bad for Chris. Wow, he had a young daughter and she died in a car crash. That's so tragic. And Chris and Hector had bonded over that years ago. So sad.
Well, welome back Allison and good luck in your job search. :)
I feel so bad for Chris. Wow, he had a young daughter and she died in a car crash. That's so tragic. And Chris and Hector had bonded over that years ago. So sad.
Well, welome back Allison and good luck in your job search. :)
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March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter. I am glad that Eddie did not turn out to be a total jerk. Poor James is so sweet and innocent. I wonder what Devin said to explain things o his little sister. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, Eddie sounds a lot nicer than James described him. Maybe having a g/f softened him up a bit!
Congrats on your book Allison! :)
Congrats on your book Allison! :)
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March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay! i will catch up on this soon. that harry potter fan fiction i wrote for a friend took up most of my time and energy that i had to refrain from reading any story. looks like i have tons of chapters to read now. i will get to this soon, that's a promise. i was supposed to volunteer and do the editing for you but alas, i got so busy with the HP story and my work plus a writing challenge that i couldn't resist joining.
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March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woah! Seems like Devin was really getting way ahead of himself. Although James was definitely sending out mixed signals. I mean, kissing Devin like that when he came through the door, and moaning when Devin was kissing his neck while they were watching tv, he was egging Devin on.
They should come clean to their parents; how can they keep up the facade of being together? They will only end up hurting each other more. Plus James is confusing Devin with all the mixed signals he's sending.
They should come clean to their parents; how can they keep up the facade of being together? They will only end up hurting each other more. Plus James is confusing Devin with all the mixed signals he's sending.
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March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! What is Devin thinking going crazy on James like that? These two have so much tension going on, they need to resolve their problems before their behavior becomes more and more desperate. Devin has changed so much since the beginning of the story. He used to be James' protector and caretaker. I still want them to be together. I just don't know how they will solve all their problems. I am off to check out the LuLu link.
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March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Am I greedy? I really wish that this would end up as a threesome between Devin and James and Chris. However the story is going so wonderfully that I will be happy no matter how things turn out. Love the story.
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March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think it'll be hard for James and Devin to pretend to still be b/f's in front of their parents. But maybe by pretending and being physical, James will finally give in to Devin. So Devin's plan worked w/Hector! lol I guess it's a good thing Hector and Chris already knew one another! lol
Great chapter; I'm looking forward to more! Congrats on your book deal! :)
Great chapter; I'm looking forward to more! Congrats on your book deal! :)