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person JayDee
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very well fitted to the drabble limit. I think the last line works well, letting the reader know how things are going to go even as it ends. I hope Dan doesn't end up in ER having the cornucopia removed and explaining he was cleaning naked and fell on it...
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, wow. Let me tell you this right off the bat: You're an awesome writer. I swear, I would've gone NUTS trying to do what you did. You get mad props for that.

Insane Harvest: I *definitely* got a sense of insanity there, of evil foreboding. Left me with a lot of curiosity, too, wanting to know just exactly was going on with the lambs and the madman.

Tradition made me do it: Hahahahahah, you scored on light and fluffy. It made me laugh out loud at the end, with the 'reveal' and whatnot. I can't believe you accomplished this with a twitfic! How do you do it? :P

The cornucopia doesn't go there!: Now THAT was hot and funny at once. Again, what the hell is your secret? I laughed so hard at the mental images, especially since a cornucopia IS a pretty daunting thing. You have a wickedly awesome imagination.
person hallie66
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. I would be running out the door if my lover had that thing. Hehehe. Good response :)
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO! My mind, well, lets just say it's prolly going in directions it shouldn't right now! Poor poor Dan....
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Would that make it a horn of plenty of fun ... or pain? :) It's a cute little scene, especially since Dan may subconsciously be heading to the bedroom out of interest, or perhaps he's interested in trying but being playful. :)
person JayDee
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A whole pumpkin pie? You'd think the dog more likely to fight him for it than make him eat it - I guess that's kid excuses for ya. The joke was pretty good.
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I'll remember this excuse come Thanksgiving. =D
person Anon
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LMAO Clever use of the word!
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ROFL! It was the dog I swear!!! Clever, very clever!
person pittwitch
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was cute! The dog always gets the blame, lol! Thanks for sharing, PW