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for Under the Mask

by Divanora

person Eiennoren
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Improvement approved! Love the changes! Write more?
person BlueDragon
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please please please please WRITE MORE!!!!!!!
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. There were lots of details about the world for a one-shot, but I also felt a little teased. I want more details about how these two interact with each other and why they keep running into one another, why a human would be willing to go for such a strange relationship so quickly and how they work it out...more please.
person Althydia
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I'd really enjoy reading more about Zaffre and Andrew's relationship and life together, if you're willing to add more to the story...
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Besides them coming to a quick orgasm, nothing seemed rushed. I wish Zaffre could somehow find a way to be untrapped from his current form.
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!!!!! This is sooooo cute!!!! ^____^ I love it!!!!!
person Eiennoren
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I approve most loudly! The story was deep enough that what smex there was highlighted instead of detract! I loved the story and would love to know what's next... Andrew's question needs answering! Lol I adore dragons so creating something out of this is a great idea!!! *begs*