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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw I wanna know what happens next I hope you update soon and I just love Takumi He's so cute: )
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far ! And Takumi is not pathetic at all !!
I think you've written his emotions and despair very well...
I can't wait for more !! Keep the good work XDD
I think you've written his emotions and despair very well...
I can't wait for more !! Keep the good work XDD
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So happy. I am so glad to see a new chapter of this story. I love it. I thought your portrayal of Takumi was very realistic. I get the feeling that he is going to be quite the handful for Gregory. I enjoyed their predator morality conversation. It is painful for Takumi to never be able to see his family again. I wonder how this will affect his parents and sister. Keep up the good writing. I am eager to read some more.
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story so far. I really like both of your characters and i love how you portray them both. this seems really interesting so far, so I hope that you will continue soon. Thank you for sharing.
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing. I am looking forward to reading more soon.
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is very interesting. Its not your usual vampire story where the captive is instantly in love, and I like that. I like the fact that you put his fear into the situation as well. I can't wait for more on this story~ keep up the good work.
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December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am very interested in this story. Will Gregory just keep him chained up forever? What will happen to the little sister? Will they develop some sort of relationship? How hot will the sex be? I look forward to the next chapter if you put it up. I also have a reuqest: If you decide to not continue this story, can you please post it somewhere so I won't have to check back infinitely for a chapter that will never come?
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November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome story! i really like it. the first chapter was so long and delicious.
i can't wait to see what this vampire's problem is. he sounds like an asshole. XD
hope the human gets through it all right.
also your reviews are on the "must be logged in" option. you might get more reviews if you had it clicked to anonymous reviews as well.
i can't wait to see what this vampire's problem is. he sounds like an asshole. XD
hope the human gets through it all right.
also your reviews are on the "must be logged in" option. you might get more reviews if you had it clicked to anonymous reviews as well.
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This first chapter is excellent. I really hope you continue writing this because I am hooked. My favorite scene so far was Takumi dancing in the night club and getting his first gay kisses one after the other. I can't wait to read some more and to find out the story behind this vampire.
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank You! I have been waiting for a story to catch my interest. There used to be several stories I followed on AFF but since then it has been a dry spell. Your story is very good, well written and pulls the reader in immediately. Please don't stop. Can't wait for the next chapter...