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for Lamplight Hush

by Goldfirecat99

person miles
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the new chapter ! It's been so long !
He's really a bastard ! Doing this to the poor boy !
I don't see how Takumi is going to escape this situation...
I hope you're going to update soon ^^
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sucks to be Takumi. he;s utterly dependent on aa creature who would easily become bored of him once he's tamed. A vampires pet.
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEEE UPDATE!!!!! :D
person fudge
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loving this, hope you continue soon!
person Sokua
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy....you ARE continuing this aren't you? And Takumi....good god I would have put up more of a fight! After the first initial blow where he slapped me (which I would have revolted immediately there after), I would have just gone off. Better to go out with a bang than accept such a surreal situation. Sure, unhappy lifestyle but I would have a little sister I need to take care of. And calling me "baby"? If he wants to play that game go ahead- but don't expect me to try and actually survive. I'll kill myself by some manner- starvation even it be or jumping over the edge. I wouldn't care. Ohhh you're SO good at invoking emotions. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person KandyPop09
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
There has totally got to be a sequel to this. I need to know what Grergory plans on doing! How Takumi will escape! (If he can). Seriously, I have to read the next chapter ASAP.
person Kristina
schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ho my guh. Where do I start? This story wins the internetz. And i think takumi is still totally likable in the second chap. I hate stories where the kidnapee falls so quickly and easily in love with the kidnapper. The vamp deserves all that takumi has dished out, he freakin kidnapped him and violated him for Pete's sake! I like that you are taking the time to slowly and realistically "build" the story for us. That's what makes great fic great unless your purposely writing a pwp ( which do have their merits) lol. Please we need a 3rd chap! *puppy eyes*
schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You don't have to apologize for how meek Takumi seems! This is just the beginning of his character development!!! Very well done, I can't wait for more!
person oo
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
er, i like, ill check for updates.
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! loved it more please????