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Dear Delightfully Wicked Mistress Pittwitch:

Knowing what I do of Wicca Ways, yes males honor the Goddess through the high prestess, and take somewhat a back seat in the power department, yet I never made any connection with such a thing as submissive pets and BDSM games that takes in your series of your tales. But there is a rich malevlent dark side to the fairies and elfs of elder world they weren't all pink and precious they had cruel side. They appariently consider human servants vastly inferior to them. So I recognise such behavior might be acceptable under certain situations... after all its a fantasy. It amuses me that Aine's refine tone and speach becomes much more formal during her disaplained bouts, as she wacks male bottoms and other parts into submission. Being the rebelous person I am, I would find it difficult to hold affection for anything or anyone, who would seem to get off on my pain, I just don't swing that way I guess. But for some reason your main nearly incestous bro/sis characters are not terribley likeable to me they seem too vain and too selfishly, self envolved to the point they don't care about anyone, but having their wills and desires obeyed, almost to the point of madness.

I do find it amazing that you tell so much story and create such complex characters personalitied in so few paragraphs and it makes me want to see what happens next.

Personaly I think Colin [despite his affection for Aine] and his bro are started get bit bored with their subservient station in life needs take a nice long walk and disapear into the great dark woods, never to be seen again. I can't wait to see what you write next???

Rebellious Cal the Gslinger

14. Poppy

So, is this just to create a positive association between relaxation & pleasure and the chosen bride in Edward? Or is she just trying to calm him so he'll stop yammering? I can imagine all sorts of things she (or her pets) could do to a helpless big brother. It's an interesting, and effective, teaser for the next part.

Drowsy - I think Aine comes across much less harshly with the moment's tenderness of the in-between drabble. Connor's definitely suffering throughout, and it's very clear to the reader - especially with his self-control over the curses and then Colin feeling the need to shush him when he does cry out... It's interesting to see more of the Brothers together while not in company, they come across warmly to each other when more informal. At least Connor was aware he'd properly earned his strokes, he's a smart boy, that one, isn't he?

The title certainly fits the story well, too.

17. Drowsy

Now there's even more intrigue as we glimpse at Connor and Colin's role in all the happenings. Besides the hints in the narration, the "Live to serve" line made it clear that those two have an interesting secret as well.

Aine's way of reminding Colin to control himself at all times is harsh, sure, but also very effective. All in all it's good that, along with making sure Colin had to suffer through it as well, that the long ride home would help "remind" Connor where the line was that he'd crossed. Still, she does it because she cares, obviously, and there's something more important for her and Edward's goals. Also, the care also shows by her washing his sore stripes herself instead of making him or Colin do it instead. The bond is very important like that I guess. :)

Thanks for another peek into these families as they struggle to survive in a fast-changing world. And have lots of sexy mild torture. :)

Connor's had it coming, he's been pushing for a few chapters hasn't he? I figure he, knowing everything he surely knows in Aine's service, must have known the likely result... and so surely he's - at least subconsciously - been wanting a good stiff punishing? I thought Aine's rough handling of Connor's genitals perhaps even more exiting than the cropping. Having both the brothers present for the punishment seemed extra kinky, nice touch!

16. Moon

That will teach him to doubt Aine for even an instant. The punishment seemed fitting, and taking advantage of his "unspoken concerns" over his important bits made it so much better. What's striking though is how much he seemed to love the attention as much as he obviously wasn't too thrilled about the physical pain. In the end (no pun intended) it seemed worth it to him just to have his stinging moons caressed. (As for the inside joke about the journey home... If faieries exist then why not? :D)

I'm guessing that making Colin watch was to humiliate Connor just a bit more, but at the same time it could have been comforting as well. On the other had, Colin had hesitated at her earlier orders, so this is a reminder to him as well to jump too.

Well, there's so much going on in the Aine and Connor's relationship alone (never mind Edward and all others) that it could probably be discussed at book club meetings and on the Pittwitch fan sites for years to come. Yes, I still think there it is that good and has enough substance. ;)

Wheee! Even though I got a sneak, there is nothing like the full story! His poor moon :P

(Recaptch: John, iteass *giggles*)

Oh, my dear gods, Connor did ask for that. A very clever use of the prompt, and a most enjoyable one. I'm so intrigued to see where this will go, and what Aine will do. Womderful!

I like the atmosphere of the dining room, I could almost hear the clock ticking in that wait, even if it hadn't really been part of the story. Nice advancement, and works even if read out of sequence.

Sand - First dirty minded thought was that the job title of manservant sounds a whole lot kinkier than it ought to in the context of their lives... Could this complaining bride have already been introduced to us readers, possibly in a colder spell? :p I think the small part of Connor cleaning/dressing Aine comes across great, very tender and still servile.

I like how you used the hourglass (and, whoo! A/N mention, thanks kindly) for the sand prompt, An hour glass does seem to fit into the whole atmospheric setting you've established - I almost feel with some of them as if the old hour candles wouldn't be entirely out of place either.. It wasn't just incidently thrown in, but worked in properly with Edward telling the time from it and then accidently breaking it, which really shows how widely annoyed he was.

Sure hope the next prompt fits in with the master plan. As an early guess from the first three, it could *possibly* be a bedroom related theme this time(if sand is similar to sandman, and there was morpheus and pillow...)