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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Harvest
This slice-of-life tale is evocative enough to practically take me to the scene. The way the priestess applied the sigils makes me look at finger-painting in a whole new light; speaking of which, I loved the idea of the writing being visible mostly by reflecting the moonlight.
This slice-of-life tale is evocative enough to practically take me to the scene. The way the priestess applied the sigils makes me look at finger-painting in a whole new light; speaking of which, I loved the idea of the writing being visible mostly by reflecting the moonlight.
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November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Harvest: That was a really sensual way to celebrate the harvest moon! Only thing: harvest moons are red, not white. :)
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November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gah, sorry had to delete and start over cause apparently my shift key hates me!
I love the imagery and the sensuality in your descriptions, it makes me feel like I'm there watching from afar. Wonderful work!
I love the imagery and the sensuality in your descriptions, it makes me feel like I'm there watching from afar. Wonderful work!
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November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now that's a ritual I'd turn up to watch!
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this! I appreciate that you know how to correctly write a M/s couple! :)
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October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I can hear the longing in his voice as he says it!
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October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It gets the situation and mood across, and even something about the mood of their "playtime" relationship. It's a really good and happy drabble.
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October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You seem very good at this drabble business, to set an entire scene and emotional sense with 100 words and none of them wasted.