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November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
pittwitch that was awesome!!! I love the offering at the end :)
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November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Now this was awesomely erotic. I kind want you to do these people on a longer series! The characterization was amazing and the situations were just wonderfully erotic. 'Living cornucopia' why didn't I think of that? It's such a fruitful idea! Also, I really like the original spin you put in the D/s relationship, nice to see a cheeky slave and a loving master. Keep these people in mind for the future, please! :D
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November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cornucopia: I love how this keeps continuing! I was slightly sad to think it was a one-time ordeal when Harvest came out. But then it's continues until now! Soo happy! AND there was a Master/pet relationship and it was done very well! You can feel the love and trust the two have in each other! I feel kind of bad for the initiate, but at least now she won't complain. ^^ A job well done!
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November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Tradition:
Works well as a follow up to harvest - particularly as the concept seems pretty humorous, while at the same time the context is pretty serious. Some people take a lot of offence at perceived disrespect to their traditions, while the complainant is just practical about the cold!
I could see the same comments about the traditional diving in icy water some people do on New Year's Day. Would it really miss the point to, say, move it to midsummer? :D
Works well as a follow up to harvest - particularly as the concept seems pretty humorous, while at the same time the context is pretty serious. Some people take a lot of offence at perceived disrespect to their traditions, while the complainant is just practical about the cold!
I could see the same comments about the traditional diving in icy water some people do on New Year's Day. Would it really miss the point to, say, move it to midsummer? :D
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November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, lovely! Your Harvest flash was fantastic, I wasn't sure if it would be a sensual ritual or a sacrificial one so I was kind of pins and needles as the end came up. Very nice though, Druidic tradition can be so over looked sometimes.
Tradition had me giggling in class. I could see a couple of my friends complaining about the cold and nakedness like that. I like how you made this ancient culture tie into modernity. I think we sometimes forget that even a thousand years ago some people didn't want to be naked in the cold.
Tradition had me giggling in class. I could see a couple of my friends complaining about the cold and nakedness like that. I like how you made this ancient culture tie into modernity. I think we sometimes forget that even a thousand years ago some people didn't want to be naked in the cold.
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November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Tradition!
Ah, you really are putting together your challenge responses to create a larger slice-of-life feeling for the ceremony. This is actually one of the other things I wondered about while reading last week's story, and I'm sure there's a plethora of different feelings, observations and activities involved with the Druidic rites.
Now I'm wondering if you'll manage to add in a full story line over the coming months too. :)
(Oh, and the real answer to the noviate's question: "Because we all want to see you naked!" ;))
Ah, you really are putting together your challenge responses to create a larger slice-of-life feeling for the ceremony. This is actually one of the other things I wondered about while reading last week's story, and I'm sure there's a plethora of different feelings, observations and activities involved with the Druidic rites.
Now I'm wondering if you'll manage to add in a full story line over the coming months too. :)
(Oh, and the real answer to the noviate's question: "Because we all want to see you naked!" ;))
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November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like how you added someone who didn't think the tradition was all that (And I read it as part of Harvest). It was a nice bit of realism in a fanciful story. Another job well done! :]
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November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh! More Wiccian stuffs! I like the fact that it works in with the last prompt - That's awesome!!
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November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Harvest - The scene described has a kind of timeless quality, giving the quiet impression they've been doing what they're doing for a long time. I feel like this story takes the prompt very seriously. Good to see a nicely erotic description of that man's arousal, too.
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November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was very interesting to read. I look forward to reading more of your fics ... :)