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by Jesterjp

person ikkichi
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was, ah, certainly a nice thing to read not even an hour after waking up. I tell you what: If I was tired beforehand, well, I'm not anymore, and I think I'm ready to face the day. Maybe not get out of bed just yet, but face the day nonetheless. xD

And, I doubt I should have been, but I couldn't stop laughing throughout most of this. How the characters interacted with each other amused me so much I couldn't help it, I swear. *makes excuses* But, yeah. This was a lovely distraction from reality (and when I finished it, I swear one of the first things I thought was, "Well, fuck. Now reality looks so much shittier. *stares out window with slight irritation*").

(*sniffs* I can't think of anything to ramble about for you. This makes me sad. ;^;)
person CandyCaner
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, me gusta! :) I loved the lines about asking for a sixty-nine. It was very sexy overall. I'm glad you incorporated your fear of thunderstorms into it. ^_^ Thank you!