rate_review Reviews

I guess what pisses or frustrates me the most here is this whole "TEST"
in Joey's eyes, Mark 'passed the test'. And even mark - Aiden - will believe he passed the test.
But any logical sane reader, would know Aiden failed it.

It was an opportune moment to escape! And he did not. I'm utterly dissapointed at this lost chance. Not that I am going to blame Mark 100% because, circumstances has made him the person he is today, but still... I had hoped. That Mark still had hoped and still harbored the desire to escape and be free. *sighs*

To think he willingly gave himself to Joey like that in a public place.... *sighs*
I don't know what to think nor feel anymore.
But I want to see how this ends.

I was hoping they would get arrested, then they would hopefully find out about Mark. I think that's his real name, damn even I'm forgeting what his real name is!! That's bad LOL O_O!

I'm too tierd. and its too late....
I'll come back and leave another ranting review when its a more decent time.

Aiden... Mark..... I want to throw a brick at your NUMB SKULL and pray the brick rebounds and kills Joey. and you get amnesia and return to freaking baseball and a normal boring life.

agoraphobia ? If that girl believes that on ONE interview basis. then she sucks as a Psychologist.

Wow,
I really find the psychological depth of this story very touching. Hoping to see more chapters soon.

Leoward

Selim
I have no idea where you're gonna bring this story.
Because Aiden is a lost cause at this point.
this is Stockholm syndrome to the point of brainwash. I'm not even sure you can call it Stockholm syndrome since Joey put's things in Aiden's head. And thou Aiden KNOWS its not true, he doesnt say anything about it. But I'm sure, he remembers all the FACTS. but he STILL isn't doing anything about it.

Why?

Oh god................ It's been 2 years....... His parents have moved....... Now what.

Well, I hope Joey follows through on his wish to never hurt Aiden. And I only say Aiden because I forgot what his real name is(curse my awful memory!). Joey is very sweet in this chapter...but it doesn't forgive him for kidnapping and raping a teenage boy. I look forward to more of Aiden's thoughts and Joey's actions!

I'm confused as to how I should feel.
...I feel like Aiden should call for help, but at the same time...he should stay with Joey?
UGH.
This story makes me depressed ;O

I was so excited to see you had uploaded another new chapter!!!

I hope that Joey doesn't kill the puppy, Max, later should he get mad at Aiden for something. I think that would break Aiden for real. I know abusive people can hurt animals and I hate that cause I love the little critters.

It was interesting to learn more about how Joey came about kidnapping Mark and that he saw him after he gave a speech at his school. I wonder if Mark remembers seeing Joey that day and that he smiled at him.

I am so conflicted now about Joey but am kind of hoping that somehow their relationship works out and Aiden (and Joey) will find some kind of happiness together. I wonder what happened to Mark's family and whether or not they have giving up looking for him.

Looking forward to next update.

I am shocked and completely appalled at the comments I've been seeing for this story (which is so interesting by the way). How could ANYONE want Mark to live happily ever after with that monster? He was kidnapped, raped, and tortured by that abomination, and he should just give up hope of getting out of there and be content with how things are? My God, that's madness. There is NO LOVE between Mark and that monster (monsters don't love), and even if there was, that doesn't erase or excuse the horror of what has happened. That monster belongs in prison, not at home happily playing house with his victim. Mark (and the reader) should never give up hope that he will escape. He needs to hold on to that thought for his own sanity (which he is clearly losing). If Mark was my son or brother, I would never give up hope that he would be found, and I sure as hell wouldn't be thinking 'I hope he makes a good housewife for that sicko'. Saying that Joey loves Mark is like saying a pedophile loves the child he abuses. Sick.

My reason completly agrees with basilisk6, but my emotions don't. I think I have Stockholms Syndrome too, because of the way we're inside Aidens mind x.x