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Hello! I Just read this all the way through... seriously one of the best stories I have read on here. It's really incredible and I cannot wait to see more! Thank you!!

I know this is wrong, so so wrong, but I can't not love this story. I know I'm in the minority in saying that, and that's ok. A subject like this is bound to stir emotions, and sometimes whilst reading this story it made me feel very uncomfortable. You truly are gifted to get me to love something like this. Please write more soon, and thanks so much for sharing XD

I hope they take Mark/Aiden to the Hospital because he needs to be examined and checked out. I felt so bad for Max.
I wonder what's going to happen to Joey. I hope Aiden't family will be understanding and not judgemental of him with everything he's gone through.

I'm so glad Jeff was able to find out who Mark really was and that bastard was arrested. But my heart hurts for Mark and his parents. he's beyond brainwashed and his parents aged from worrying, not knowing if he was dead or alive.They find him and the way that monster brainwashed him it's like he's dead.I would really like it to be a happy ending with Mark getting the help he needs and his parents being understanding about what Mark went though and how he was brainwashed by that bastard.And that sick monster in jail never being able to contact Mark ever again, but I have a horrible feeling that's might not happen .

Finally the police are here! Not that it would probably do any good, with the mental state Mark's in and all. But we can still hope that he will get better...won't he, I hope so. At least some semblance of stability.

Please please please please please please update this!

Well, at least Susan got some information on Mark..along with some false info..but whatever. Taking the good with the bad. Now her dad(who is smart) can save him...or save him in a literal sense. Mark's mind is so fucked up right now, he doesn't even know what he wants.

This is definitely not Stockholm Syndrome. It would be much better if it was because what's happening here (brainwashing) is so horrifying it breaks my heart and makes me want to vomit at the same time. Joey needs to die, but then I also think that death is too good for such an abomination. Since there's only one or two chapters left to this story, I sincerely hope that you'll end this story on a happy note, with Mark being rescued and Joey incarcerated for life for all of the atrocities he has committed. Seeing Elizabeth Smart and Jaycee Dugard rescued from their nightmares makes me desperately want the same thing for Mark.

;O ;O
MOAR CONFUSED.
oh why oh why must you do this -
but damn, getting caught in public. 8D

basilisk6,Thought it was just me,I agree with everything you said 100%. I don't see how anyone could want Mark(Adien) and that disgusting monster to be together.Hopefully his brother investigates the little bit of information his daughter got from Mark, his real last name and then can they throw that sick bastard under the jail, because this is no love story. I don't think Mark is his first victim.
P.S I would like to know if who the real Adien was? And what happened to him? If there was a real Adien?