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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That poor guy....this story is just crazy and I look forward to more.
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October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Mark. It looks as if this guy has been watching and planning this for a long time. I am eager to read the next chapter. Good writing.
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October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, this story sounds interesting.
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October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, tasty.
Nice set up, good grammar, heroes whose logic is clearly understood. Everything great story needs.
Please continue to write more))
Nice set up, good grammar, heroes whose logic is clearly understood. Everything great story needs.
Please continue to write more))
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October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg!
I have to actually say I loved this story and it was very well written...lol and its only the first chapter...I look forward to more.
The only problem I have with darkfics is you never know it end of the story is going to be good are end badly.
I get so into stories and I felt so bad for Mark(Aiden)...but I cannot for the next chapter*smiles*.
:)
I have to actually say I loved this story and it was very well written...lol and its only the first chapter...I look forward to more.
The only problem I have with darkfics is you never know it end of the story is going to be good are end badly.
I get so into stories and I felt so bad for Mark(Aiden)...but I cannot for the next chapter*smiles*.
:)