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WHHY DIDN'T HE ESCAPE SOONER!!!??? OMG....
just how bad is his mental state now? maaan...
but, this entier chapter, made it seem like. life there, isn't bad.
the way Mark tells the story. it's like he's gave in, doing what ever Joey wants and likes to avoid punishment.
he still wants escape. but has he no pride anymore? i think, maybe not.

but if he goes on like this... man, i worry he'll just end up being conned into 'loving' that mad man back.

this is dark man. but damn interesting. so keep it coming~

- nekoii

This an interesting story that I desperately hope you will continue in the near future. It is simply to good to be abandoned. I can see Aiden (Mark) slowly submitting to his tormentor. I hope he will eventually escape from his prison but I hope there are years before that. I imagine Joey finally taking him shopping (like a couple shopping for groceries) and someone who knows Mark seeing him and noticing the empty eyes and following them back to the apartment. Then that person could call his mom and the police come to the apartment and ask to see each of there ID'S and since 'Aiden' has none taking him in for questioning and 'Aiden' not being able to answer any questions with several of his former friends and family identifying him as Mark. I truly hope you will continue this as it an amazing and well written story (your beta rocks).

Update soon please!!

I can't wait to read more of this story

I hope you update quicly; Your chatacteres are interesting, I am curious to see how they will evolve!
Bye
M

Ah... where were you?! I thought you wouldn't want to continue this!!! but I'm so happy to see that you updated.

Thanks for the new chapter! That was great! Poor Mark! loosing himself in the situation ... couldn't understand what's happening!

Please update sooner and Merry Christmas ^_^

yay! an update! thank you! I really like this story, it's very interesting! i hope u will finish this. i will be very disturbed if this story remain unfinish. i check for an update everytime i turn on my computer, and that's basically everyday, hehe. great job you are doing here, please more updates.... pretty pretty please.... *my best puppy eyes*

Your update is the best Christmas present ever. Poor Mark...he doesn't seem to take a break. I can't wait to see how the story continues =)

I love the transformation that Mark is going through. Thanks for updating.

Happy Holidays

This is fascinating for me, and I hope you write some more soon. I feel sad, and want him to be able to escape, at the same time I wanna know what the kidnapper will do next or how far this will go! Gee, I'm a happy ending kind of person, but again I really am liking this story even if I'm afraid of what the ending will end up being. lol

What a nightmare. It will haunt me forever. The fear of being put back into that box would be enough to put Mark under that guy's control forever. It makes me so angry that this guy gets a blow job as a reward for the horrible torture he put Mark through. No punishment would be enough for what he has already done